I will send mine updated again

Not sure if I have the updated version of the OC you accepted, but I'll try and find it and send it in again. Glad that yours back and feeling better :)

Late review. Been busy with chores and stuff so I hardly have time for myself :'D

Anyhow! This is a useful class project! It trains them to quickly analyze people's quirks as fast as they can in the middle of battle, doesn't it? Would be much more effective of a practice if they had to watch videos and analyze them while doing so, but baby steps! :3

... What is Emma's quirk owo Sounds rather alarming.

I can shamelessly admit that the boy with Grim actually caught my eye. He seems like an interesting character, and I'm honestly excited to see more of him! :3

And it seems like we have a little problem about Grim's vigilante activities and his classmates! Wonder what they will say about this *w*

That's all for now. The date and stuff... If you think you can keep up with the dates and not get confused with them, go ahead! :D I don't think it really matters, though owo

Hope your feeling better soon. Got my character down well and looking forward to seeing other characters when you update again :)

its nice to see a little bit of the villains perspective and also the drama between Grim and Sirk hahaha, great chapter and cant wait to see the next chapter soon!.

Aaron’s creator here again. Really enjoyed this week’s chapter, the rivalry between Grim and Sirk is real, and I love how everyone is basically an ‘extra’ in grins story, or as much of an extra as I see it, each character is interesting and I can’t see what clicks and relationships form because of all these different personalities.

I also love the villains and secrets that are being hidden, all of your writing is interesting and draws the reader in. Can’t wait to see what future interactions go down especially if there is a ‘U.S.J. Arc’ like scenario with the class fighting villains. It would be really cool to see these aspiring heroes fighting trained villains who have had years experience with their quirks and this kids only 10-14 years of using their quirks.

Can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope there are more student interactions and just everyone getting to know each other. Hope your wrist is better and hope you have had a wonderful year so far!

THE DOCTOR MUST BE PROTECTED!
*coughs* I'm sorry owo

Damn, that's quite a side effect right there. So if Grim sends out many of those constructs and all of them got destroyed..?
... I don't want to imagine it.
No wonder he was angry at Sirk, but Sirk does have a point. He should've told his friends about it beforehand. But that's a nice realistic human factor!

... Their dorms are like a five star hotel OAO

And here we got more appearances from class 1-A! I must admit, that scene is kind of... bland? Adding some descriptions of what they're doing or their expressions instead of just writing down what they said could bring more flavor to casual scenes! I did see one with DeShawn, but the others' literally only spoke so we can't really see what their personalities are like.

I'm glad to see Aya in this chapter! :D Sadly, she's one of the OCs that felt dull in this chapter, but I'm glad you added that bit with her closed eyes. Hehe :3

Looking forward to the next chapter *w*/

great chapter! hmm looks like something interesting will happen soon, I wonder how the students will get in trouble? xD hehe pls update soon! btw thanks for accepting Coral

A good chapter, enjoyed seeing the teachers and the new villain group. I'll have to think of new quirk for when the villain forms come out, that it adjust my original one. Cant wait until the next chapter

This has been a fairly tame chapter in comparison to the last few, but that's not a bad thing. It's good to take a break from the action every once in a while.

I don't have much to say about any of the classmates featured in this chapter. I'll probably have more to say once we see their quirks in action.

All in all, this has been an alright chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one with bated breath. :)

(P.S. I hope your wrist is feeling better.)

I know I’m late to the review but I loved everything about chapter 4.

My boy Aaron using his quirk to the fullest he is able to right now! And I have been working on him in terms of what his quirk actually can do and able to sense electricity around him, whoever they is a shift in power or a person nearby that is either disrupting or changing the flow of the electrons was one of the first things I thought of.

I like the teaming in terms of Aaron and kenaki (think I’m spelling that right if not I will go quietly.) and seeing how each person works together when in a battle. I could see my boy getting some friends in this rag tag bunch of newbies.

I just realized that they're doing 4 vs 4s, but since they only have 20 students there's gonna be four people left out. So the final match would be a 2 vs 2 I believe?

Anyhow, it seems that we've reached the end of the first match, and what a match it was!

While Sirk might have ruined the fights by destroying those shadow monster things Grim created to attack Lionora, he also made up for it by being the deciding factor of their victory. He's a fair fighter alright, but he got his priorities straight. Fight? Why fight when you can just jump over and win the battle?
*claps* I approve.
Poor Nick though.

Coral only had a few lines but she's already becoming one of my top faves. This epic child.

Grim and Sirk are like literal rivals. One is more dark-themed and prefers to play dirty while the other is a gentleman who plays fair. Complete opposites. This will be fun to see *w*

Aaand... Teacher once again left his students to become lost. Sooner or later these kids are going to be specialized in searching for unknown places. Why, they might even easily find the villains' secret lair!

Looking forward to the next chapter! :3

Nicely done chapter X3 I enjoy the quirks of all the students. Love seeing all the quirks, the similarities to different syocs with quirk I've read in the past. Especially love Midas Touch, instead of a simple gold manipulation its what's it's more based off the lore.

great chapter! omg Grim is really strong I wonder how important to him are his constructs to make him react like that. Maybe they are either a part of himself or family or something? anyway really enjoyed this chapter, hope to read more soon!

That's my boy, Kaneki. You'll get 'em next time.

The first Battle Trial has definitely been an interesting encounter. Between the crazy quirks of all of the competitors, there are a ton of counters and synergies that I wouldn't have expected. Additionally, I can see a few 'cliques' of friends between the students forming inside of my head, but I'll reserve my opinion on those until we see more of the whole class. :)

So far, I've been a fan of everyone's quirk. They're all super interesting. I wouldn't have thought of Aaron using his Electrokinesis to 'feel the air,' but with that, he and Kaneki might make a pretty good team in the future. Kaneki also needs to start worrying more about intangibility quirks. Those seem to be a major counter to his abilities.

I'm liking the rival dynamic between Grim and Sirk currently, and I hope that gets developed more in the future. I additionally liked the little tidbit about Lionora saying that the Battle Trial's arena is, "like a maze." Being a Minotaur, I would have thought that she'd have the absolute spatial memory ability of one, but that turns out not to be the case.

I'm looking forward to the next battle trials with bated breath. I'll see y'all next time. :)