Short but sweet, and slightly bitter. Not unlike a fine wine.

O MY GOSH! *bursts into tears* I just read the WHOLE thang... umm, that is, right after FINALLY beating the game... *bursts into tears AGAIN* and I am a HUGE seymour fan! I've explained the story of seymour (everything in your story) to my friend... Who wrote some story about charlie from Mighty Dux bein abused as a kid.. And that pretty much ties everything I've found out in the game digging around 4 seymour info in guadosalam and macalania. Bottom line: IT WAS FANTASTIC! It deserves to be more than just 3 parts, though.. Oh, Im actin like Maechan again, so I guess I'll leave ya now...

Oh. My. Yevon.

I just read all three parts of this and am STUNNED. I am not what you would call a Seymour fan in any way, shape, or form, but all three parts of this were written so well. Your descriptions are fantastic, you have a wonderful talent for painting a mental image. You've explored a lot of parts of the story that I always felt were wanting, especially Seymour's relations with his mother.

Once more, this was fantastic. You're very talented.

Fantastic _ And all that praise I gave to the other two!

Wonderful... very detailed and great

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Deathy