This is fantastic! You gave Inside out the villain it never had. I'm guessing the rest of Inside out would go on the same way as originally?

I hope you release the next chapter pretty soon because I really want to know what's going to happen next will the dark emotion Spite takeover Riley's Mind or will our heroes Joy, Sadness & Bing Bong stop him.

Oh wow this is a great start, I'm already in love with Spites evil personality.

Can't wait to read more :)