Wow this is such an awesome idea! Would love if you expand on this :D

this is an amazing story write more please

Ooooohhhh! I’m super intrigued already! Yes please continue this little nugget of awesome!

Pretty good so fsr. Cant wait to see where this goes.

I can’t wait to see more from you! I love how you introduced the story and set it up plus this is one of my favorite rare pairs, at least that’s what I like to call them. I love the idea of Laxus being his usual intimidating self but soft for Lucy. Keep up the good work!

Love the setup. You have done a wonderful job introducing the characters and theme of the story. I am super excited to read more from you! Xoxo

This seems great! Lucy is so clueless, can’t believe even Natsu noticed Laxus had a soft spot for her and she didn’t lol can’t wait to see where you go with this, keep up the great work!

I like it! Good job! I can't wait to read more :)

I really like the start, especially that Laxus and Lucy want to get to know each other better without one of them already being in love as it seems (slow building stories are always better). Hope to read much more of this!

Alright, you got me! It’s well written unlike half the Fanfics I read. I didn’t have to rework sentences and correct grammar mentally to make sense of anything. Looking forward to chapter 2! Keep up the good work!