Reviews for Where It All Began
Guest chapter 2 . 4/18/2019
This is absolutely incredible! You must keep writing more stories! I’ve been looking for a writer who perfectly captures everyone’s character, but is also a good writer, and I think I found one! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Sanyu chapter 1 . 4/16/2019
Omg this is the best hiccstrid fiction I've ever read, it's so cuteee absjjsjsjjaha
httydastrid4life chapter 2 . 4/11/2019
More! I need more! I just love this haddock family fic! I. NEED. MORE!
DebzAnstey4 chapter 2 . 4/11/2019
I'd love them to take a family trip to Dragon's Edge and then Hiccup and Astrid can share stories from their time their.
CajunBear73 chapter 2 . 4/11/2019
Their adventure to share the past with their children has all four relaxing into their 'natural state' as parents and children. In Zephyr and Nuffink there can be seen mixtures of Astrid and Hiccup, blending into who they will become as they grow up.

Hiccup's 'pilgrimage' to where his and Astrid's lives, and the region's, changed forever, gave them all a time for the elders to fondly sit and remember where it all started for them all, while the youngsters were free to display their inner selves and be themselves.

Another day at an end in old Berk, I'm sure the night's not over for Hiccup and Astrid, after they put their kids to bed...

CB73
DareDreamer chapter 1 . 4/11/2019
P.S. Whenever I read a fic like this about abandoned Berk, I keep feeling Jurassic World: Fallen Kingdom vibes. Might be the whole ruin and reclaimed-by-nature thing.
DareDreamer chapter 1 . 4/11/2019
I envisioned Old Berk in its ruined, abandoned state myself, only my version is about a century later. Everything is all worn down and I added some aspects from Rise of Berk, and the Riders' present day descendants discover it, along with a secret organization dedicated to protecting the Riders' memory and the dragons' existence.
StrikeTheDragon chapter 2 . 4/11/2019
can you make a one shot story with toothless the light fury and their night light kids?.
Blue September chapter 2 . 4/10/2019
I love the Haddock Family soo cute!
Calvin chapter 2 . 4/10/2019
I have some ideas:
The Light Fury bonding with Zephyr and Nuffink with Toothless' failed mating dances.

The Light Fury bonding with Hiccup and Astrid the same Toothless did with Hiccup during their first meeting with each other.

The Defenders of Berk going into action again when the Warlords return and declare war on the Hairy Hooligans.

The Outcasts, Berserkers, Defenders of the Wing, Wingmaidens, and other allies of Berk visiting New Berk.

The daily lives of the dragons in the Hidden World.

The daily lives of the Hairy Hooligan tribe on New Berk.

Someone challenging Hiccup and the gang for New Berk's resources, Hooligan tribe included before getting their ass handed to them.

Nuffink asking Zephyr where babies come from.

Slave traders kidnap Nuffink and Hiccup and Astrid see red.

Zephyr learning about her father's history.

Adult Zephyr and Nuffink visiting their now-elderly parents with their kids.
Plain Jane Pixie chapter 1 . 4/8/2019
So sweet! Please write some more. I'd love to see more family fluff. (;
CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 3/29/2019
Unveiling a legacy, both parents helped create, at the place it all began...and from where it almost ended.

The love the family has within is seen in each face as they look to each other and to their futures.

And then...comes a key place in Berk's history, eh?

CB73
Mariah chapter 1 . 3/28/2019
wow very nice and when they see the cove which is a very special memory for their parents because that's where it all began.
Calvin chapter 1 . 3/28/2019
I do wonder if one day a new tribe will inhabit Old Berk? Presumably after the age of Vikings and dragons has gone, the people of the 1980s will find the island, demolish the old huts and buildings to make room, and set up shop. Or the Berkians will find a way to sink their home island to prevent enemies from discovering their history and secrets and using it to their advantage?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2019
This was so wholesome! I loved it so much! It’s really great how you explored the face that the kids made it easier for Hiccup and Astrid to be happy. They’re an extremely adorable, very happy family and I love them. I can’t wait for the next chapter!