*dramatic gasp* Mistake!

This was so good!

Awwwwwwwwwwww. That's cute. Quick question. How can a 16 year old be in the running for a government leadership position? Can Lloyd really be the head of the secret ninja force and govern all of ninjago? I think not. But I like the concept of the people loving Lloyd.

I'm glad Lloyd was able to still love his parents and have the justice system take... well, justice.

Overall, cute ending and awesome story!

Oh, Lloyd! Don't give up!

Is this going to be like season 9 were Lloyd, "Can not fight, but can resist,"? Or is he going to win them over with love and turn them good?

SO EXCITED!

I knew the final chapter was gonna be called that.

That was so good! Why do you have to end, story?! Why?! DX
Now as it was Father against Son, it's Son against Uncle... I wonder who'll win the election (Wu hopefully, Lloyd's a little young), but it's a good thing that they're having one in the first place considering the fact they had no choice with Lloyd's parents last time. It's very nice how Lloyd is still visiting his parents in prison, I doubt that they'll get the sentences they want though.
I loved this story, and I look forward to ones you write next. You're an amazing writer!

Yay! that was a brilliant ending! im so happy with how this turned out!

NOOOOOOOOOO!
This is my favourite ninjago fic and now it’s done what am I going to do this was an amazing story good job

Ooh... I loved this story SO MUCH! Mainly because it’s awesome, but also because it’s short and cute, like how I write most of the time. Keep up the good work!

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It’s nice to see the story wrapped up, but also open ended at the same time. Who will win the election? How will Lord and Lady Garmadon’s trial go?

I’m kinda of curious though. Is Lloyd old enough to be elected? 16 seems a little young to be in charge if an entire city. I mean, it’d be cool to have a follow up story exploring those themes and living a post dictatorship. How would they deal with dissent among the citizens? What if a group like the Sons of Garmadon showed up? Or Chen? Or any of the villains from the show?

But no pressure. It’s nice to see open ended stories where you can imagine how it ends. I’m just spouting ideas. _

Great job! I loved following Lloyd’s journey! Keep writing stories!

Well done! Simple and satisfying! Overall a great job and definitely a story to be proud of!

Nice ending! I would like to imagine that maybe Lord and Lady Garmadon get out of prison, but who knows? It's funny how they say they hate the Ninja, LOL!

I think it would be cool if Lloyd was in charge of Ninjago.

Great job with this!

Awww, *sniff* that was lovely. So Lloyd finally worked it out, *sniff* Koko and Garmadon really love him so much that they'd willingly give up *sniff* everything they had just so they could see him... That was a nice climax, and it's good that he didn't have to literally beat up his parents. That would have been grim (and probably traumatizing). They do deserve to be put in prison. They've done all these horrible things to Ninjago, to the point that people are rebelling against them, but it's still nice to know that they love their son more than the world they rule... Ok that came out wrong, but you kinda get what I mean.
Can't believe it's almost the final chapter! Well done throughout this story, I've enjoyed it the whole way! :D

Aw, Lloyd found the way to defeat his parents, way to go! Sad, but touching ending to that whole dilemma. I look forward to seeing the final chapter!

Yay! Lloyd didn’t have to fight his parents, and Ninjago’s saved!

(Also, I hope this is close to the end, because I can’t deal with an emotional plot twist right now)

Can’t wait for the next chapter, and keep up the good work!