This is a very nice Story. I love it.

Ooh, I love it. Carol and Maria's friendship in the movie was so refreshing, and the dynamic with Monica in the mix is delightful. It can't have been easy for Maria to say goodbye to Carol again...you really captured that melancholy atmosphere and family spirit here.
I think my favorite line is "they all have their own traditions and bad jokes, and most of them do, in fact, come in peace". Beautifully captures what Carol has seen and learned in her time in space.
Heart-to-heart, honest conversations are my favorite thing. This one definitely goes on the list. Cheers!

Its just wunderful