Reviews for Vixen of the Hidden Leaves
YeagerMeister31 chapter 12 . 11/26/2019
Well, that was certainly interesting, to say the least, and damn a scary side to Sakura lol
YeagerMeister31 chapter 11 . 6/30/2019
Well, that was interesting I never really liked Hiashi and now he's just being a power hungry jerk, Hinata everytime she opens her mouth I cringe she's so pathetic in my mind but whatever, I wonder what Hiashi's planning and I can't wait for Sakura, Tsunade and Neji to stop it, Naruto really is frustrating in this story also but then again so is Sakura and everyone seems to change there opinions it's so damn troublesome lol
YeagerMeister31 chapter 10 . 6/29/2019
Well, that sux Naruto should have just said NO I don't love Hinata why's he being a pussy, still, the other parts were interesting, I really hate the Hyuga clan minus Neji
Darth Tenibris2 chapter 13 . 6/26/2019
Should just abandon this pile of shit. Would be a VAST improvement.
Rivet94 chapter 13 . 6/26/2019
hey , thats fair . i had the ending well in mind for my fic and it worked out great honestly . if the rewrite is still narusaku and sakura is still really different from naruto as a jinchurukiithe fox body parts coming out , the way she interacts with the female fox , the way it interacts with her healing jutsueven better . you could even motivate the whole thing better . example: in this version of the final battle, kaguya got a good hit on sakura , who ends up heavily injured despite the strenght of a hundred seal . So naruto panicking about her dying drowns her in sage charged fox chackra to kickstart her seal further. in doing so it works , apparently without consequences . the battle ends as normal . unfortunately the sage jinchuruki chackra , the seal and sakura's dormant inner mix in an explosive way . creating a small cluster of sentient chackra , similar to the fox because of naruto , that exist within the seal , and grows over the years as sakura stores chackra in it until , instead of happening at random , during an heated spar sakura activates the seal and ends up overtaken by the newborn kyuubi chackra , and then you go from there . she would still need a seal similar to naruto to properly use her chackra again so you could still keep that fight scene . just some tips if you need them honestly . hope this story pops back up some day . see ya
YeagerMeister31 chapter 9 . 6/26/2019
Well, this was another interesting chapter but it's also so frustrating I think you probably already know my views on that Stalking Hyuga so it's getting worse, Naruto should just dump her ass and be done with it, and then get with Sakura but she's to stupid to see that Naruto loves her and keeps pushing at him to give Hinata a chance I mean it's damn frustrating.

Hinata's comment about Sakura doing nothing for Naruto well she's dead wrong I mean what exactly has that Hyuga ever done jumped into battle against Pein and get her ass kicked, confessed to him in the middle of one of his toughest battles yea real help there (Being Sarcastic)

Whereas Sakura has helped Naruto time and time again, healed him many times stopped him from dying when Kurama was ripped out of him (really Hinata, Sakura's done nothing huh.)

I hope you don't think I'm being an ass I like this story alot it's just frustrating for me but it does add to the drama after all, what is confusing as it's like all there friends see NaruSaku as an item and not Naruto and that Hyuga, makes me laugh to know end.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 8 . 6/25/2019
Well, that was interesting can't wait for more I hope Naruto breaks up with that Hyuga soon, can't stand how fake that relationship is although Naruto's already thinking it, which is good.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 7 . 6/24/2019
Well, that was an interesting chapter an ultimate Byakugo damn pretty awesome, some things are weird like Jiraiya being alive same for Neji, the odd things wrong like Sakura dressing like she does in Boruto then when Naruto sees her she's somehow in a nightie and cardigan like WTF, Now I can't wait for Naruto to just end it with Hinata, he can still be a father to Boruto without marrying the Hyuga.

It was interesting that Sakura told Naruto the truth about cutting him open and it was kind of amusing that out of all of that the only thing that simple minded stalker heard was she kissed Naruto by giving him CPR, I also think it's hilarious that everyone seems to be so against NaruHina I mean I am also but going by what Kakashi seems to think there wrong for each other and the whole village think that also, that is so hilarious if I'm perfectly honest, just who is happy there together, because so far it's nobody but Hiashi Hyuga.

Still I wonder what happens next I have to admit though the fact Boruto seems to like Sakura and drools over her is creepy but whatever.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 6 . 6/23/2019
Well, that was interesting and amusing so Sakura's been having wet dreams about Naruto interesting lol, I can't wait for Naruto to dump Hinata, I don't like her and never truly will to be perfectly honest, in my mind she's playing a losing game to win Naruto's heart even if in canon they got together it's an utter joke NaruSaku should have happened the only pairing that really I have no problem with is Shikamaru and Temari, everything else was just to weird or downright creepy although Choji and Karui well have nothing against that to be honest.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 5 . 6/22/2019
Well, I must say I didn't expect that reason, love that Hinata's totally jealous I cringe just thinking about her but whatever this stories getting interesting, I also find it kind of funny that everyone seems to want Naruto and Sakura together especially Tsunade and the Ichiraku's not sure about Kakashi and Yamato, Wonder what happens next
YeagerMeister31 chapter 4 . 6/21/2019
Well, that was interesting and creepy that Boruto the little shit was checking out Sakura, but I have to ask how has Sakura got some of the 9 tails chakra in her the onlt explanation I have is from the wound she received years earlier when Naruto wen't 4 tails form against Pedomaru.

I love that Teuchi is teasing Naruto and Sakura and doesn't care about Hinata not that I do either, Really though Hinata's been in a losing battle to win Naruto's heart since the Academy and only got what she wanted because Sakura told Naruto to give her a chance.

Wonder what happens next.
swagkura chapter 12 . 6/21/2019
In the earlier chapters you mentioned that Naruto was 29 so not sure how Sakura’s 32 in this chapter. Also if I had to describe Naruto and Sakura’s interaction in this story I would use the words ‘a big ass circle’. They discuss the same things solve the issues and two chapters later the problem is somehow back. For instance the whole only liking Sakura because of Naruto’s rivalry. But I am still enjoying this fic. And just some advice if you plan on doing another fanfic plan out the story fully so as to avoid ending up where you are now. That’s what I’ve learned since starting fanfics.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 3 . 6/20/2019
Well, that was pretty funny
YeagerMeister31 chapter 2 . 6/20/2019
Well, that was different Sakura left the village, huh and Sasgay dumped her that sux
YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 6/19/2019
Well, that was interesting, I must say I loath NaruHina it's nothing but a pathetic joke in myt eyes no build up and the bam there together it's a joke, don't get me wrong not dissing the author it adds to the angst after all, I think the pairing is one-sided, but enough about that, this has an interesting plot and I wonder what happens next, has Hinata realised the truth more than likely, Naruto didn't want a baby yet and it was a mistake.
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