Your story is amazing! I love how it shows the bond between Pokemon and trainers as equals and the one between Achilles and Patroclus, instead of one being dominant or anything. And your descriptions of the setting is wonderful, I especially like how it's not complicated so I can imagine it without trouble or wondering what's going on. This story definitely deserves more love, it's awesome. The length, the characters, the diction, the premise, just everything! I can't wait for the next update! Though no pressure, take as much time as you need to complete this masterpiece!

Interesting interpretation of Pokémon Greece.
Patroclus relationship with his Pokémon is similar to the protagonists of the franchise.
Bet the greek gods have legendaries. The problem is the symbolism between gods and legendaries.