Reread this. Missing this. Continue this. Thanks for writing this. Bye for now.

I really hope you update. I really want to see alucard curbstomp hookwolf

Oh God it took awhile but I’m Fairly Sure he is Archimedes The Antagonist of Fate Extella the One with The Main Character Gets Split in mind Body and Soul

Looking forward to seeing where you take this, whenever that may be~

While I like the story premise, and most of what you’ve done so far, adding the shadowy group summoning other servants was a bit much. It doesn’t mesh with the rest of the story, and just seems kinda tacked on. Besides that, there is more than enough crap to deal with in worm to not need more added on like that. The whole gaining powers from blood is actually ok though, despite what other reviews have claimed. It can just be explained away as ROB bullshit.

3 and destruction pretty sure that’s velber.

I...am pretty sure Nero admitting her insecurities about being left out AND acting demurely when alone is very much in character. She's not so shallow as to always be boisterous and confident, Nero's ultimately someone who yearns for affection, and wishes to be acknowledged and loved back. Sure there'd need to be more scenes between Adrian and Nero to create more intimate connections before the scene but it's not out of character at all.

"You might even be able to gain Parahuman abilities"
Yeah. No. You could at least bother to research how powers work in worm before starting the fic.

More more more !

This is going very nicely. Thanks for writing this, and bye for now.

it starts to get really asspull

Creative and fun start

Use alexander the great, he is best rider!

there's alot going on here so I'll just leave you with a good job and depart waiting for the next installment

So there's another player in this game, who are you I wounder, nice job on the chp by the by