Reviews for Naruto the Master of Summons
FateBurn chapter 36 . 3m
Good chapter
david.teague.3950 chapter 36 . 3m
Part of me doubts Lancer, aka father, would approve I mean she was in an arranged marriage and look how that turned out. Then there's saber who's attracted to him despite knowing that he's her brother. Archer might agree but then I don't know. One of the hardest to persuade would be Jackie since that little devil might have a sixth sense for identifying someone who's trying to manipulate her "mommy".
Bonestar chapter 36 . 7m
I actually do not think I can make a vote on this. I have not seen enough interaction between Naruto and his Servants to understand how they would get along. I do not know how many of the Servants feel about their master, nor how Naruto feels about his Servants. The only thing I can reliably say is that Abigail Williams, as Servant Foreigner, would not like Ravel on the principal that Ravel is a Devil and with Abigail being a Christian from Salem and being responsible for the Witch Trials... Well, I can only imagine her reaction. Then again, her being in contact with Sut-Typhon, aka Yog-Sothoth, may give her a completely different perspective.
ShadowBloodedge9396 chapter 36 . 16m
And once again...rather than developing Naruto out of his own trauma fully alongside arias, Naruto is instead focusing on making Rias and others develop by...focusing only on their negative traits and not lifting a finger to do anything for them because it’s not his problem. Refusing to understand that maybe just maybe he’s only focusing on the negatives of Rias and not seeing that there’s a chance that she doesn’t have the things needed to help others. I get this fits with his kingly personality in this iteration...just frustrated to see yet another “focus on and exemplify the negatives of Rias’ personality.” So...Naruto sees Rias as essentially ALL bad(granted I’ll give that he has legitimate reasons for thinking she’s all bad) while seeing Riser isn’t TOO bad...
Well, I’ll try to make this be the last of my rambling of the one thing I have a problem with in this fic. It’s still a good fic in the end that I want to see more of. This talk with Ravel for example...actually, I stand corrected on my starting statement. Naruto HAS developed at least a LITTLE past his past trauma with women, thanks presumably to Asia and maybe Koneko as well. He didn’t outright refuse Ravel nor was he as on guard as he normally would be, quite a bit open with her actually. So now he’s less of what certain people would call “misogynistic” nowadays, it seems, lol. Not saying he ever was, just that a certain group would view his distrust of women that way.
Let’s see...as for who of his Servants Ravel might be able to convince...
I WANT to cross Mordred and Artoria off cus Naruto is their brother/son and I’m used to seeing it as hard to convince a regular family for it...but Mordred and Artoria are far from a normal family for Naruto, and with their history might actually be somewhat easy to convince.
Fran is definitely a no go, she might want that honor herself.
Jack highly probable? It would give her a full set of “parents” after all. Just need to convince her Ravel is far more trustworthy than the bitches she killed at the start of this fic.
Nitocris and Nobbu are also possibly easy to convince with their backgrounds, especially if Ravel can prove love can be had for Nitocris to be convinced. Same for Jeanne I believe.
As for Medusa, she’s the one I’m least sure on how she would be beyond if it threatens Naruto’s happiness. Same for whoever his Foreigner is...still leaning on Abigail or Katsushika on that one btw. Unless it’s completely original and maybe even someone from another of your fics who could fit the bill as his Foreigner.
That’s all for now. I can begrudgingly accept Naruto not helping Rias for this problem but if he KEEPS refusing to help...I don’t see why he would refuse against Kokabiel or Loki granted cus they are threats to Asia and Issei, but beyond that...should I just give up any thoughts Naruto might help when he sees Riser brutalize Asia and Issei? Assuming you’re gonna keep how the Rating Game goes to canon. Unless there’s something different in the light novel, or in your plans in general. For all I know, you’ve had Issei secretly training on the side thanks to Naruto’s influence, and maybe Rias actually WILL see the advantage Naruto sees she has. Not holding my breath on that last one though, for the reason of my rant above, :P
Kanciano chapter 36 . 23m
I don't know what are you planning to do with this possible marriage between Naruto and Ravel but I really want it to happen. I think that Ravel is a good girl that deserves a good husband and it will be really interesting how she will try to convince Naruto's servants, especially Mordred, his unknown sibling. Not to mention in your story she is seen as Fem Naruto. It will be really fascinating how she will try to convince a fem naruto why this marriage will be a good choice
TimothyB chapter 36 . 33m
The only reason I would be happy about her convincing him is if they actually can fall in love. It does say romance after all. Keep up the amazing work.
stockheart chapter 36 . 37m
None of those servants will agree. This marriage will bring more benefit to ravel than naruto. What will ravel give naruto? Her name only maybe money? Not worthy enough to get married. Not to mention ravel not heirweak as hell. Even rias will bring more benefit to naruto than ravel,tbh.
Issei ODR chapter 36 . 40m
Creo que ella podra convencer a altria, nitocris , medusa , jeanne de Arc.

Con el resto seria muy dificil.

Como mordred , jack , Fran .

Y con oda estoy indeciso sobre su elección.

Pero ravel seria una buena pareja para naruto aun si pierde raiser en el rating game, los phenex saldria beneficiados de esto al obtener un matrimonio con su hija menor y un clan noble en extinción.
EyeofSoren chapter 36 . 45m
Easy to convince nobunaga, hard but possible for lancer, berserker wants a family so maybe but probably not because of attachment issues, assasin is a coinflip between stab happy and happy to get more moms. Mordred will hate it. I imagine that he will politically marry one of the devil pillars but I imagine that there are other pillars OC or otherwise that could be a better fit. Phenex comes with shit tons of baggage, I lean more to Agares, or an OC from another clan as stated before. Even a FemSaiororag could be really nicely done albeit slightly more difficult to justify. Although a connetion to Bael, and having a wife that is strong would be nice. I imagine that with the way his character has been described his wife being able to take care of herself in a fight seems mighty important. I honestly figured he would marry Mordred and they would start a new Le Fay/Pendragon/Uzumaki kickass human based nobility house.
calderoneric758 chapter 36 . 1h
Archer will probably say yes for world domination Mordread maybe a yes for funding with the alternative of would be hard to tell but if ravel can give good points and actually care naruto yes in the with assassin unless it gives her two moms and for berserker she hates anyone equally unless sheravel doesn't give Naruto stress she's good for caster who was it again o don't know
Lord Vortrex chapter 36 . 1h
Personally I'm expecting Berserker and Saber to try to kill her. And I can't really say that I can see any of them really agreeing. Based on the mindset you've made for this Naruto, and that Archer is supposed to have a somewhat similar one, maybe Archer will be convinced. I can see Assassin calling her a prostitute to her face. If you use Foreigner I can kinda see her being whatever about it. But for the vast majority I can see it not happening.
darkhound115 chapter 36 . 1h
I think Nobunaga might agree since she was a emperor so she knows he'll need strong influential allies. I'm not sure if I'm thinking of the right one but caster values family so that might be easy. Mordred I imagine would be like if you defeat me then I'll accept. Lancer as a servant I think be the same as naruto just convince the other and she'll agree. But as Papa Lancer might just want him to find true love. I only see two ways for jack which I still don't think will be it. So she let's jack torture her cause she can heal, I'm sure she won't do and naruto wouldn't allow it. Or she offers to be Jack's second mommy. And no idea for Fran. I don't know the other servants, who was rider and ruler.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 34 . 1h
Well, another great chapter I like Koneko so I hope she gets with Naruto also.
RAY0000 chapter 36 . 1h
for now Naruto has only summoned five of the nine those being Mordred, Jack, artoria Lancer, Nobunaga and Fran I can see her being able to convince Jack saying that she will also love them provide them with nurturing affection, for Artoria she'd 0robalby say that she would try her best to bring happiness to Naruto who hasn't had much of that and actually wants him not because of status but because of how he is as a person. Fran I'm not so sure about convincing her considering that Fran is protective of Naruto and not very trustful towards others for me personally I don't see Fran agreeing. Mordred would probably like ravel she'd just tell ravel don't be formal or act stuck up and say what you think no politics or manipulations just be blunt and say what you think. And nobu were talking about nobu here I don't have a clue about nobu
XXX777 chapter 36 . 1h
I'll admit to not being familiar enough with the Fate Series to accurately judge how this meeting will go but I do know that Lancer will be the tipping point along with the other saner Servants who have similar views as Naruto himself.
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