Reviews for Kingdom Hearts III
Xerzo LotCN chapter 13 . 7/21
so riku needs to beat his nobody to reclaim his fill power i guess and he teaming with yuffie to beat it and larxene

and everyone else beat the titans
(like why where axel mickey and zeus beaten even with the help of all the other gods
when terra solod wind (how though)
aqua and terra beat ice
sora solo lava (and solod the other before)
then kairi and sora could have beaten rock but zeus instantly beat
it like it is so odd power inconsistent is a major issue for plot in games
i always found it odd
but why did zeus come back and do that instead of going to face hades after he freed the other gods)

now all that is left is hades and the other guy that will flee most likely
II chapter 11 . 5/11
Excellent chapter. So how are you going to bring Ventus, Roxas, Namine, and Xion back?
II chapter 10 . 5/8
I like your story so far. I just hope nothing bad happens to any of the heroes, especially Sora and Kairi. I wonder what world they are going to next. Please put up the next chapter as soon as possible.
II chapter 10 . 5/4
I like the story so far. It's pretty good. I cannot wait to see which world they end up in next.
Yurosoku chapter 10 . 5/4
Kairi swearing profusely seems really off to me...otherwise one world down, more to go! Decent so far.
avengersassemble1099 chapter 10 . 5/3
In retrospect, when you have a cutthroat group of nearly overpowered warriors like this, even a boss heartless like that kind of falls flat.
64thVanSull chapter 10 . 5/3
Nice job. Although, I think you may wanna consider splitting the group for the next world. I speak from experience, especially since I used this same world when I wrote my KH fic six years ago, keeping all the warriors of light together for each world really doesn't add anything, and it's easy for the readers to forget. I don't know what you have in mind, and I know you're basically rewriting the game's plot, but it might appeal more to your readers if you expand on the other characters' involvement.

And since you already went with Roxas/Namine (broke my heart by the way), can you at least do Ventus/Aqua? PLEASE? There's not enough Venqua stories that aren't pure lemons. Besides, Terra's too dull.
64thVanSull chapter 8 . 12/27/2019
Never mind
64thVanSull chapter 9 . 12/27/2019
It’s been a while since I read the other chapters, so I don’t remember what you’re gonna do with Roxas, but is Roxas/Xion completely off the table?
avengersassemble1099 chapter 8 . 12/27/2019
That was a nice chapter
Yurosoku chapter 7 . 10/3/2019
Getting good...looking forward to seeing more of it.
avengersassemble1099 chapter 7 . 10/1/2019
Next chapter please!
Hero of Neutrality chapter 6 . 9/20/2019
keep up the good work, i hope you dont abandon this fic
64thVanSull chapter 6 . 9/15/2019
More please! And please don’t make Sora the oversized child with crappy dialogue he was the first time around.
avengersassemble1099 chapter 4 . 7/4/2019
Good chapter. Sadly, I must wait for the next one
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