| Reviews for By My Bedside |
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   catherine910424 chapter 9 . 3/25 This is not a dramione! Draco loves Pansy Parkinson, not hermione! Dramione fans, do not waste your time here. It's really horrible how draco treat hermione. The divorce is very wise for hermione, and draco is not worthy a second chance. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/21/2019 please tell me this have a sequelTT |
| Slytherclaw Black chapter 9 . 10/23/2019 McG writing Narcissa is highly amusing. I like that it's a friend date. Slow and steady now. |
| Slytherclaw Black chapter 8 . 10/23/2019 I would like to say poor Draco but I don't feel sorry for him here. haha |
| Slytherclaw Black chapter 7 . 10/23/2019 I have never thought about Ron and Astoria together but...I like it! |
| Slytherclaw Black chapter 6 . 10/23/2019 I'm cheering Lucius on! Hit him with those hard truths! |
| Slytherclaw Black chapter 5 . 10/23/2019 Oh, Draco. Ultimatums never work on HG. Tsk tsk. And now Im grinning because I have a ridiculous soft spot for Harry. |
| Slytherclaw Black chapter 4 . 10/23/2019 You made me feel bad for Pansy! *gasp* |
| Slytherclaw Black chapter 3 . 10/23/2019 My heart is bleeding all over this chapter. |
| Slytherclaw Black chapter 2 . 10/23/2019 Ahhhh! The interactions with HG and Lucius! I live for stuff like this. Gah...this still hurts. |
| Slytherclaw Black chapter 1 . 10/23/2019 *runs in muttering apologies for taking so long to get here* Whew...that hurt. I knew it would but ouch. I really like this premise though! Claw |
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/12/2019 Awesome |
| DeathDagger chapter 9 . 7/26/2019 Omg! It can’t just end like that! |
| Ravsi chapter 1 . 4/28/2019 I liked the idea of this fic quite a lot and would like to see more of it. Now I hope this criticism is constructive but this could really have benefitted from a more in depth look at their marriage in the first year when it was going well and how it all fell apart. What happened that made Draco run to pansy other than her reappearance in his life? Why does hermione love him and why he her? How did they fall in love? Like I said I like the idea of this fic and your writing style isn't bad just a more in depth character analysis. And I do still want to see what happens next! How do they work it all out? Do they get a happy ever after with each other? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/27/2019 I'm really unsure what this is. There's a lot of plot holes and lack of character depth. He loves her, but there's never any justification of why, he doesn't ever show that he's trying in his marriage. Neither of them do. What happened in that gap between them getting married and him going to Pansy that completely obliterated any communication? Also, please consider a beta, I really think you'd benefit from having a second set of eyes to look over grammar and plot points. |
