I really liked this! Excited to take a look at your other stuff

Kudos. What an amazingly satisfying read from beginning to end. Loved every word.

You know other then Harry having the most weight on his shoulders during the wizarding war I think that Hermione had just as much all things considering I mean she obliviated her parents to keep them safe and from harm, fought side by side with Harry Potter through thick and thin, was tortured but still willingly followed along side Harry Potter to make their world a safer place. However don’t get me started on her later Husband Ron Weasley I don’t think he truly fought alongside Harry Potter willingly as evidence suggests by there time hunting for the Horcruxes I mean for crying out loud he up and left them half way in the hunt, but they forgive him when he comes back after who knows how long. Talk about letting your temper get the better of a person.

This story was AMAZING! I loved all the complex dynamics between the characters the most! Regulus’ character was awesome, by the way.

Love it, but there are a few typos.

Overall very well thought out and a great story!

Beautiful. Moody was certainly her best bet for action. She knew her chances were slim, saving everyone was the better bet

Absolutely fantastic story, I didn’t want it to ever end!

This was altogether lovely. I completely lost myself in the story, and could picture each detail clearly. You did a great job keeping everyone in character. It was dark and the characters had real struggles and were broken at times, but that didn’t detract from the love story, it added to it. Well done!

I don’t normally comment repeatedly as I finish chapters of completed works but I wanted to say now, lest I forget later, that I really appreciate your portrayal of Hermione and the PTSD she obviously has. She has been through so much and I’m so glad you took the time to show her weak and hurting rather than just diving into the past, ready to take anything on. This is a broken Hermione and I look forward to seeing her rebuilt in the coming chapters.

I have so much to say about this fic... all great things with some minor notes on somethings that bugged me, but knowing full well that it's your story and you've done an amazing job with it, just one thing that's stuck in my throat till I finish reading and write the actual review, so please don't get put off by this... I hate how hermiome treats the Prewett twins.. only time it made sense was in the very beginning in the order meeting when she would have smiled at their antics but wanted to maintain character, otherwise it's just annoying, they're awefully sweet and loveable characters -and it's a nice to see them featured and get to know the original Fred and George- and you've portrayed them as such, why Hermione is constantly rude and short with them is beyond me

is Hermione doing anything productive other than having sex? in potions classroom while brewing! seriously? and how can a 15/16 yr old be so horny? and everyone and their father is giving her demeaning nicknames! it's just disgusting! you have got so many good reviews! that's why I started reading... sorry, can't continue anymore.

wow I have so many things to say, ok first off I absolutely love your writing style, this fic is written so beautifully it was awesome to read.

I love how you didn’t make Hermione and Sirius get together right away, it definitely gave the story and their relationship more depth, which was very appreciated and nice to read, and let’s be real, 15 yo Sirius couldn’t handle Hermione

and the depth you put into this story was JKR worthy, it was so nice to see you implant a lead early on for it to come back later

such an amazing fic will definitely read again!

Wow!
You are an amazing writer. I couldn’t stop reading this such a different and exciting story. I can’t wait to read more of your work.

I loved this fic so much! Thank you!

great start