*Hastily trying to catch up* I... have emotions with Qui'ra.

Capture Palpatine... What could possibly go wrong...?

AND THERE IT IS! THINGS GOING WRONG LAST MINUTE! ANAKIN YOU DUMBELL WHY?

Aw, I love Luke and Yoda's interactions!

...And Luke and Mara's interactions! Just kiss already! X3

Dang the action was great here! Loved it :D

It kind of contradicts with Sparks; in here Leia becomes the empress, and in Sparks Luke is likely to become the emperor eventually. I don't know if you intended that, but it seems fair:)
P.s) You write action sequences well, though you said you hate writing them...XD

Yay!

Luke was totally mocking her.

OH KRIFF! This chapter was MIND BLOWING! I swear you got my heart beating fast and my anguish just skyrocketed! The Evil Emperor wasn’t expecting the invasion during his lavish party... yet he wasn’t surprised either. I’ve always know just how evil Emperor Palpatine was but the way you described how he feeds off the Fears of the prisoners and the staff... and the hate and envy of his courtiers was shocking. I really liked how Mara Jade came to Luke’s defense when he almost was hurt by one of the inquisitors... their banter was almost like flirting. But the real anguish was when Luke and Leia faced Darth Sidious. The Emperor sure knows how to press all the right buttons just to get into their minds. It’s amazing how well the Emperor knows the twins, by telling them that Luke could sense feelings and emotions where as Leia has more anger. I swear when The Emperor Leia tells the Emperor that the Force has chosen them to rule the Empire and Leia response with “An old man in a bathrobe did!” I laugh so loud I had to cover my mouth. The battle against the Emperor and the twins was nerve wracking but the cliffhanger... AAAHHH! Where is VADER? You wicked girl! (Just Kidding! I really like you!). I will practice my soothing exercises and take my meds and wait for the next chapter. I hope you are doing well and keeping safe. ;)

I don't know what I'm going to do when this is finished! I live for your updates.

Well, the plans have been made... What’s very interesting is that mostly everyone involved have their own view as to “WHAT” the outcome should Be. Padme, the warrior of Democracy and believer of Justice wants the Emperor alive. But it’s seems the rest of the Skywalkers have their own agenda. They mostly want the Emperor DEAD! I have to say that I was so giddy when. Vader spoke with Padme... He even said her name. Even Mara, has her own thoughts about the Emperor... I don’t blame her. After the conversation between Vader and Emperor Palpatine was interesting. How does he know about the Rebel Attack? More Spies? Speaking of spies... The trial and conviction of Qi’ra was justifiable and sad. When she stated “No one is really ever free..” such a sad statement... but I do feel sorry for her, because she did things to “Survive”... but she made some bad choices too. Wow... The intensity of this story is more and more with each chapter.
Thanks for the update... your dedication to your story and your readers is truly appreciated.
I do hope you are doing well and keeping safe. ;)

Wow!. You keep me on the edge of my seat.

Palpating must die. At this point it’s a given that he does.
The interesting part is Vader’s plan.

OMG! This was a Such an INTENSE and REVEALING chapter. I thought the banter between Luke and Leia is always so cute and funny. The bond they have with each other goes deep within the Force. I Love that Luke braids Leia’s hair. When Padme asked the twins about Vader... Leia was very quick to scowl, where Luke is so much more mellow. I think Padme was trying to get a feel to how Vader was going accept her. Now... Q’ira! That crazy little Bitch! I gasped and almost fell off my chair when I read it! Han is now a HERO! I really like his reasons for saving Luke... (I giggled). I thought that Padme’s reaction to Leia’s actions when she felt Luke was in danger was surprising... BUT not as surprising of what she called Vader. Vader, instantly knowing WHO he was speaking with. I am glad that Emperor Palpatine thinks that Vader is 100% on HIS side... Evil Fool! Thank You for the update. Your story never ceases to surprise, stun and humor me. It uplifts me especially when I’ve had a hard day... like today.
I hope you are doing well and keeping safe. :)

AAAHH, this chapter was awesome! I'm so glad Leia got the opportunity to tease Luke about Mara!

I. Have. Been. Waiting for a scene with Luke spending time with the Ghost crew and it was perfect! Luke sparring with Ezra, bantering with Sabine, and receiving advice from Kanan! AAAAAH, YEEEEESSS!

Dude, I was only half sure Qi'ra was going to try and kill Luke, so it was still a shock! That was so scary! And Han saved Luke and was just like, 'I only did it cuz I value my own life.' I love him! I hope we get more insight in why Qi'ra did what she did.

So, the spy is caught, we have a plan and a Sith Lord on our side, and Palps isn't on to the fact that Vader ain't his no more so huzzah!... *Quietly waiting for the part where something goes terribly wrong one last time*

Uh.. did I miss something? Why is Luke suddenly bisexual? Nothing against it but it seems kind of left field.

Palpatine stands on a plush carpet. The Skywalkers have just gripped the edge of it. And they are ready to pull.

SpellCleaver, have the son of suns trilogy by blank101 I think it might make for great inspiration its my favorite SW fanfic

WHOA! Emperor Palpatine didn’t just punish “The Sixth Sister”... he executed her! He’s so EVIL. I can’t believe Vader actually arranged her rescue. But, I guess he felt a bit guilty after telling the Emperor what really happened. I have a feeling that Vader is scheming a plan... HHUUMM? My mouth dropped when after everything Mara had been through... she still called Horada a “Traitor”... all due to the Darkside influence Mara had been given since childhood. It was very interesting how she chose to go to Naboo... knowing full well that the Queen would know how to contact the Rebellion... then Luke. This was such a great chapter. I sense something BIG is coming... I can’t wait to find out. Thank You for the update. Your dedication to your readers is truly magnificent and appreciated. Please Stay Safe. ;)