Great so far. Can't wait to see what happens next... Update Soon!

I can't wait to read more, it's sooo good

Love this story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.

Great beginning so far! Like the previous reviewer, I am curious as to how Seth knew that Jessica was hurt, but then again, perhaps we can chalk it up to how deep their bond is. For example, when she was in trouble in New York, he came to "visit."

Aside from some grammar errors (commas in particular), this was a great beginning and I can't wait to read more. Welcome to the Seth/Jessica fan club!

Man, you are fantastic at writing tension. This entire scene had me on the edge of my seat. I hope Jessica is going to be okay and can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you update soon because I really want to know if she's going to be okay.

My only question is how did Seth know she was sick? Did he just know because they're that connected and I just need to suspect my disbelief? Or did I miss something and they were on the phone together or something, lol?

Anyway, great job. Seriously can't wait to read more.