Yang's gigai shouldnt hav that much strength, otherwise all gigai's would be that strong, and Rukia's isn't

Can't wait for the next chapter

Can you be sure to make an update if someone does end up adopting so we know where to go?
Thank you, I loved the story.

Seriously what is it with ppl on here every time a good I find a good story you authors just crap out and quit its getting fucking ridiculous

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Understandable. If I wasn't working on so many stories myself (One nearly complete short story, part two to another short story, the second half of a full novel length strory, the next chapters of two of my already published stories, and some major catch up on some beta reading) I'd send a PM.

Thanks for what you already put into it. Have a good week and God bless,
SomethingAncient

I understand that and I hope that someone does adopt this story and i hope that you would still keep writing not just for the people that read your work and i hope you find inspiration and good luck with future writing and just so you know that I will still keep reading anything you write and just good luck in general :D

thats a bit sad, but if you cant keep it up thats totally fine, loved it while it lasted, all i really hope for is that you update the story with a link to the new one if it does get adopted, because otherwise itd be a pain to figure out.

Just discovered this gem. I've been following your other RWBY-centered story, the KH crossover, and I'm loving both. Consider yourself having 1 followers!

I have to say I like what you are doing with story Ichigo killing Grand fisher Ichigo and Yang Chad and Blake its a great story I can't wait for to continue the story so I can the the girls of remeamnts Zanpaktous it would be interesting see you have made this story flow so well and feel so natural with romance too keep it up.

My name is Ichigo Kurosaki! You killed my mother! Prepare to die!

Awesome chapter! Loving every bit of it! Keep this coming!

I still don’t think the shipping is necessary, but I do like Blake and chad. I don’t like yang and ichigo though. I think it would be better as just friends.

It would be nice to read a chapter of this that doesn't follow the script of the anime almost to the letter. Maybe focus more on how the RWBY cast changes things? Otherwise, people could just as easily read the manga or watch the anime.

Welcome back! Gotta say though, it feels like this story is losing direction. This follows way too closely to Bleach canon; after the previous night, I have several questions:

Why did Yang, Blake, and Pyrrha come to school with Chad? That makes no sense to me. Maybe, just maybe Blake (seems a bit early for that), but all three? This feels like a cheap way to accomplish a gag.

I'm honestly surprised they weren't hiding outside the window listening in on the gym teacher's lecture and causing a distraction themselves (or at least Yang). This is an area where canon could have been replaced; Rukia not being the one to get Ichigo and Keigo out.

Why is there so little Ichigo and Yang interaction? Again, this is following Bleach canon too closely, because it feels like they're putting even simple interactions with each other on hold for the story; they weren't even curious about each other's respective nights. Which, personally, seems odd since they seem close enough for it after dealing with Grand Fisher.

Also, still no clear reason why Ichigo wasn't at, or headed to, where the girls and Chad were the night before. His absence, knowing his personality, and the fact he was invited, he really should be there or on his way since the Don Kanonji thing wasn't terribly long. This may seem like an odd thing to bring up, but I do so because it's things like this that make the world feel disconnected with itself. And a small, "Why didn't you join us after the show?" followed by a simple response would really bring things together.

The rest of it was a fine example of integration, though. Especially seeing Pyrrha investigate Uryu with Ichigo, and she felt really natural here, too. That sigh she gave gave me a laugh.

Overall, it's good to see this updated. Thank you for the chapter, and the work you put into it. Have a good week and God bless,
SomethingAncient