Wonderful story so far!

Omg this was so hilarious :D great drabble

Ha, great. I like the “cold, but hot!” Confusion. Very funny!

Awww V is such a cutie for calling Dan to help. It's also nice to see that he apologized for trying to kill him earlier. I like how confused Venom is about something as simple as a cold, but I can imagine how frightening that must be for someone who experience this for the very first time in his life, so I can't really blame him for panicking here. I hope Eddie will be feeling better soon, so Venom can calm down ;)

Wow, now that is what I call a strong start for a FF! I really like how you've described Venom's nightmare and his feelings about that. It was like I could feel his pain while reading and I felt so sorry for him. His friendship (I see them as best friends and as nohing more, just saying) to Eddie is strong in here, especially in the end. I like how Eddie is trying to comfort him and to make sure he can sleep in peace for the rest of the night. I really like this start :)