| Reviews for Unexpected |
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   katta92 chapter 24 . 7/1 it is an okay/good story but your character is very meek and seems very weak willed, and what is the point of introducing a whole new character that can change so much but still keeping EVERYTHING exactly the same, in that case people can just read the books, but that is ofcourse up to you but your character is very boring. Sorry if that is harse I was just looking forward to somebody who actualy cared about Harry, and Tori clearly does not care for him, I have a nephew and I would blow the roof if somebody like Umbridge or even Snape did half the stuff they did, I do not care if she loves Snape, your story makes it very clear that she cares ALOT more for Snape that Harry and NO aunt who actualy loves there nephew would love a man/woman so much more that their nephew. |
| Radio Free Death chapter 1 . 4/29 For technical issues, you need to make a new paragraph when someone is speaking, or when you start a new topic. It would make things easier to read. |
| Red2Ruby chapter 1 . 1/6 So excited:) |
| Red2Ruby chapter 1 . 1/6 Sounds fantastic! |
| VeronikaYekaterina chapter 23 . 1/1 Wonderful ️ the argument between them was the best bitchy conversation I ever read can't wait for the next chapter |
| mwinter1 chapter 23 . 1/1 Just words to confront front Umbridge. Yeah that'll work against her. And of course Dumbldore doesn't do sh*t. Awaiting more |
| Chelsea always chapter 23 . 12/31/2019 Poor Victoria just wanted to help can not wait for you to post the next chapter |
| VeronikaYekaterina chapter 22 . 11/30/2019 Really wonderful ️ I'm looking forward for the argument between the two of them. |
| VeronikaYekaterina chapter 20 . 10/6/2019 I must say this is wonderful story. I can't wait for update. I know that it's hard to write it, but I think you've got something. I really look forward to reading new chapter. I'm curious what will Victoria dowhen she finds out about Severus being a double agent. And I'm curious How you will write this and the sixth year of Harry's. Really really can't wait |
| JustEmma099 chapter 20 . 9/30/2019 Yass!I was starting to believe that you wouldnt upload ever again but here you are and im so excited and happy about it. You rule! |
| mwinter1 chapter 20 . 9/29/2019 Awaiting more |
| JustEmma099 chapter 19 . 9/4/2019 Best Fanfic IN HISTORY! I need more in mah lifeeee keep up the great work |
| johnsocz chapter 18 . 8/11/2019 did something happen to chapter 19, not seeing it after received email it was up? |
| Chelsea always chapter 18 . 7/23/2019 The cologne is really funny watching how everyone reacts with it |
| mwinter1 chapter 18 . 7/21/2019 Awaiting more.. |
