*Diese abscheuliche, saugende, schleimige, sellenlose Schnecke.

Gente do céu, eu não entendi algumas das falas da Luna. Inglês não é a minha primeira lingua, então ficou super confuso pra mim.

More than halfway through, you NOW announce that you're slashing Harry AND Black. Who's next, Snape?

You're entitled to write anything you please, but you're also obliged to be honest about what it is and to TELL people what they're going to be reading.

You are dishonest. I am leaving and telling all my fanfic friends exactly why.

You have created a SuperDooooperHarry (unbelievable in and of itself) by making Snape a worshipful fool that greets each new revelation with awe. Not gonna fly.

You may not care at this point, but Alecto Carrow was the witch of the twins. She was called after Alecto, one of the Erinyes or Furies of Greek mythology.

I can just picture Fred and George twin mind linking during exams helping each other out sharing answers, like, "you remember these chapters and I'll remember these ones and then we'll be set for the exam!" lol I freaking love this story. Thank you!

and a Potions Master didn't know the dangers of the ingredients he was working with, he had to be told them by some one else?

umm ... Dudley's first day of school is July 31st?

The correct translation is: "Diese Abschaum saugende, schleimige, seelenlose Nacktschnecke", very creativ, by the way :D,I enjoy reading this pretty much, thanks for your effort.

Loving the story so far.
However, I am mildly uncomfortable with the Harry/Sirius pairing. Only because of the relationship Harry had with Sirius before time travel. I don’t see how he could transfer those Familial feelings for Sirius to a Romantic one. I understand that Sirius is not the same, but I think it would have been better if they were close friends instead. Harry could have been paired with Kingsley, but I understand the reasoning behind your choice. Even if I don’t agree with it. So I’m plodding on. Sabz x

You should change the sectumsempra Harry used to collect Dudleys blood to a simple difindo, coz the first ones a dark cutting curse that has a very specific counter curse. Remember the bathroom incident between HarryDraco where the latter nearly died in 6th yr.

I really enjoyed this story. It was an interesting use of time travel. I loved the triplets. I enjoyed the good goblins. You even made me like Molly for once. Great fun! Thanks for posting.

That was quick. I think they should have courted more.

so I am new to the story, but you may want to go over the first 3 chapters. you keep changing the names of your characters. chap 2, Minerva has the middle name of Isobel. now her. middle name is Annice...

Loved it