| Reviews for A New Adventure |
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K chapter 15 . 7/12 What a lovely story. I absolutely loved it. There were a few relatively minor spelling and grammatical errors, and the odd apostrophe that crept in where it shouldn’t, but the story transcended those. |
Spazzman29 chapter 5 . 7/3 If Ginny and Luna were living together I like to think she had no idea about Ginny cheating. There is no way she wouldn't at least tell Harry. Say what you want but Luna is one of the sweetest HP characters there are and she is fiercely loyal to her friends. |
Xavras chapter 15 . 7/3 Nice story grammar needs some work it is an old wives' tale that baby's with a full head of hair cause the mother's carrying them heartburn - but it is often repeated - I have actually found it only to be rarely that the two go together with the 100's of babies I have delivered... |
Thethingsithinkabout chapter 4 . 6/28 Trey is a true bro |
guest chapter 15 . 6/2 is it bad that I wish to see a story with Karena as the main character. |
jcmat43 chapter 14 . 6/1 Okay, so just a small note, I feel that, periodically, you are using the word defiantly in lieu of definitely. Defiantly is to show open rebellion, or to boldly disobey. Definitely is to add to emphasis that there isn't any doubts; to make an idea clearly resonate. Anyhow, I find this to be a really nice story, thank you for the time and effort that you have put into this fic for all of us readers to enjoy! |
perses7x chapter 15 . 5/17 Ahhhh. Loved this story. no nonsense and up to the point. perfect length. Great work. |
ak chapter 15 . 5/9 bonne fic! |
Caliban03 chapter 15 . 5/7 Nice, simple and sympathetic story, about after the war Thank you for sharing |
Anon chapter 15 . 5/6 Great story, nicely done. I was a little surprised when they left New York somewhat abruptly, but it worked. |
bigfan22 chapter 15 . 4/23 Well done. Nice wrap-up. It was good to see Harry get the ending he deserved. Great job and thanks for taking the time to write this excellent story for the rest of us! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21 Some issues cause of your summary for starters why would harry book a flight to the states when he could use the flow network? Also leaving England doesn’t mean he’s leaving the wizarding world seeing how the wizarding world spans across the globe. Cause America does have its own ministry and the states stop wizarding academy is called ivellmorny. |
Hedwig68 chapter 15 . 4/19 A beautiful story thankyou! |
gabrieljuarezl chapter 15 . 4/16 Tks for sharing nice work |
MagicSilver7081 chapter 15 . 4/14 Great story! I love how you have managed to complete this story. I especially like how the epilogue goes. It doesn't have to give too much of other's story too. We are in here because we like Harry/Daphne relationship and you stay true with it. Looking forward for your next work! |