| Reviews for Machina Hero |
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   GUIPA chapter 5 . 8/15 Can’t wait for the next update. Also who will be in the Harem? I personally want Kyouka since she’s one of my fav characters. Oh yeah, PM me the discord link |
| PikaMew1288 chapter 1 . 7/25 After reading the Title, my Mind was on Deus Ex Machina so I assumed that Izuku had a reverse Murphy's Law Quirk not Machines. I'm slightly disappointed but only slightly because Machines sound Interesting too. It would be funny if he no-sells the Entrance Exam Robots though. |
| Nova Sudana chapter 5 . 7/23 Cliffhanger! I want Moreee! And stay healthy Author-san! |
| Nova Sudana chapter 4 . 7/23 The idea of this fanfic is anti-mainstrem and THAT'S EPIC! MOREEE! |
| Nova Sudana chapter 3 . 7/23 Masterpiece! |
| Nova Sudana chapter 2 . 7/23 More! |
| Nova Sudana chapter 1 . 7/23 More please. |
| saiyan prince1 chapter 5 . 7/16 Getting interesting. Keep up the super work. |
| BoredKing chapter 4 . 7/10 This is for chalrer 3 but I used up my 2 reviews already for m that chapter. Isn't Ochako an adult? Why would she need her parents permission to work for Izuku? And why is Melissa basically inviting Ochako into the harem when they just met? That is just weird and honestly cheapens her supposed feelings for Izuku. You could've just had her be their friend for a while and then invite her when they realize she is sad. Why would Toga need to copy someone's form for a combat test? Her quirk doesn't grant her their abilities, its purely physical so unless she was copying bodybuilders there is no reason for it. Um, what is Izuku saying that Toga is the one that has helped integrate Ochako into the group when we literally haven't seen them interact beside Toga catching her after she went all fangirl? Seriously, development is important. Don't just say stuff happened. Why would Izuku get 60 hero points for saving just Ochako but Ochako who was said to have been helping multiple people only 40? The lack of any reasoning behind most of the actions taking place really is offputting. |
| BoredKing chapter 3 . 7/10 And you need to work on your transistions between dialogue and scenes. For example, in this chapter you have them go directly from Mic telling them about the test to them talking about where to go to Iida reprimanding Izuku all without there being any indication that they moved or that Bakugou or Toga left. |
| BoredKing chapter 3 . 7/10 All Might wouldn't need help to deal with a street thug and the the way they speak is cringy as hell, most of your dialogue outside of the main group is cringy to be honest. |
| 1stHorseman chapter 1 . 7/7 Nanomachines son |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/4 Cool. Cool, cool, cool. |
| Potterformers chapter 5 . 7/4 i can just see tetsu and Kirishima shouting manly things as they fight |
| PhoenixDragon90 chapter 5 . 7/4 Great Chapter! Keep Up The Good Work! Thanks For The Meal. Till Next Time! Stay Safe. |
