xD ah this story was a good giggle, I wish there was more but oh well

Good work.

honestly i prefer the sword hero.

Dat sweet bromance.

Err, you don't mean the side story from the first LN, do you? The one where Motoyasu leaves one of his party members to be raped and enslaved because he decided to believe Myne's words over what was happening?

Hello there..

I am sorry for doing this. But my fanfiction somehow have a complaint with PM..

I'm here to introduce you my Ron Centric fic named Slytherin Weasley The Cursed Child'..

You might think it is a copy... But it's not...

Sure it's inspired from Choices,... But it's not the same.

If you have any doubt You can read it.

And please review your suggestion. I'm training myself to be a writer..

Your support will be helpful

I read spear spin off too and its so hilarious. Also who can't love the dynamics between crazyasu and purefumi. It helps that both are bishonen lol. But its rather sad that both Nao original companion basically die in that world timeline..

WTF IS WRONG WITH THIS STORY?! WHY ARE YOU MAKING BROMANCE OF NAOFUMI AND MOTOYASU?! MOTOYASU IS THE WORST! WHAT?! HUH?! SIDE STORY?! WTF ARE YOu talking about-...oh ...wait... let me read his side story... eh...?... what... father?... OMG! I SHIP THEM! MOTOPEDO-TURNED-PUPPYMOTO IS DA BEST! I LUVVVVVV ITTTTTTTTT! AUTHOR-CHAN THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCHHHHHH!

Interesting role switch. Would love to read more.

I love how Naofumi has Motoyasu's back and defended him even at the cost of his reputation taking a hit. Lol at how Motayasu keeps calling him "father" and making him feel awkward. The scene where he gave Naofumi the cloak he made was adorable. Lol, Naofumi, just you wait. On Father's day, you're gonna get a mug with '#1 Dad' on it!

I wish you would continue this.

I liked the story though...

WHY THE FUCK IS MOTOPEDO YOUR FAVORITE CHARACTER!? HE'S A FUCKING CUNTY PIG SHIT DUMBASS! no offense to you I'm sure you're a nice person but still... WHAT KIND OF DRUGS ARE YOU ON!?

Love it. Would love it more if you expanded on it as it is gold.

we don't even know the title idea could be this good and addicting. you could extend this idea to multichapter as well, cuz we want to see the bromance of nearly broken Motoyasu and fatherly Naofumi. it was like, WHAT THE HELL at first and then WHY SO SHORTTTT near the end.

we are hoping for sequel or something; like, what if Nao is a girl, accused to rape another girl cause she dressed like a boy, meanwhile what if Motoyasu is a girl that want to be treated like a girl so she lenghen (is the word right?) her hair but no one believe her cause her face and body look exactly like a man (with somethingresembling an adam apple, the board-like chest, wide shoulder rather muscled body).

whatever.

good job in writing.
- Nica siblings

I must thank you for making fanfic based on spin off! I cannot get those two out from my head after reading the spin off manga. Even worst when I got myself a copy of the spin off novel. Some dialogues in novel were changed in manga so...