Wonder how they'll feel learning Jack used to be human?

This might be a stupid question but is this a sequel to metroplex reborn?

when is chapter 22 coming out?

I gotta say I love the concepts but am a bit disoriented about the pacing of the story. You jump all over the place with little to no fleshing out of the plot. One moment they are relaxing then next a big battle with little to no fleshing out of the situation. My advice would to simply slow things down take your time there's no need to rush things so much.

I've been meaning to ask this question a couple of times but do Arcee and her sisters still have there vehicle modes and just become triple changers.

Huh? Oh, yes he is perfectly fine I only knocked him out and he should be in stasis." Ratchet stated and when he heard Jack getting back up he quickly shot him again but nothing happened so he shot him about 20 more times. "He is very stubborn and I'm quite surprised he can handle that many stasis inducing shots." Ratchet said as it looked like to Miko and Raf that he was taking notes
All I could think about when reading this was that guy who was tased 5 times at once and just kept charging the officers

The sheer amount of confusion I experienced reading the out of nowhere lemon in chapter 5 can only be conveyed by accurately by this video
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Since when does Micronus have the ability to turn cybertronians into pretenders?

Can’t wait to see/read predakings reaction

At last, it was time for you to continue this story, I must admit that you have improved a lot in your writing, in fact, this chapter is better understood unlike the first chapters.

That Chela appeared in this chapter was something I did not expect, in fact, I thought you had already forgotten that character, but I'm glad you didn't.

Although I liked the chapter, I will not deny that I am a little disappointed, since I thought that Ebony / Jack would travel to space to look for the Dinobots or something like that I understood in the previous chapter.

Don't you think you were a little sloppy about revealing a SPOILER as big as the Predaking (or Queen in this version) character?
Despite what you said, I don't think Predaqueen gives Ebony a lot of fighting, why ?, because unlike Ebony, Predaqueen is a Predacon from a bygone era, it's an outdated Predacon unlike Ebony which is a Predacon last generation.

Have you thought about rewriting the first chapters of the story with the script you have now?

Oh yeah sorry for the late reply as again in re reading but shockwave in dotm is purple just a very dark metallic purple look it up

Hey a little late I know I've just been reading it a couple of times and thinking you know you could just say that instead of him not being able to fly in space he had some kind of boosters on his back that expel his flames and allow him to fly faster or be able to fly in space due to him having what is essentially a rocket on his back or is wings

Re create and continue on the great stories you make.

Very good, make more chapters

I'm really enjoying this story and the concept of it.