Reviews for Forgotten |
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![]() ![]() Can’t wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love how Lin helped Mai. That Mori got arrested was great but I get the feeling this isn’t over. Kinda upset that Madoka suggested Mia give up Shion and was even going to argue with her about it. Who would give a baby to a rapist or his criminal brother especially when the person has just shown up after four years. The Uncle has already shown himself to be a liar, peeping tom and someone who beaks into a persons home how is that someone to raise a child. So happy Lin made Madoka be quiet. Can’t wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! That was intense! I can’t believe the words that came out of Madoka’s mouth! Stay safe and update when you can. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just saying they should have called the cops... he would never win the case then |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute in the beginning but ended with a dramatic bang. Looks like Lin is realizing he has fallen for Mai. Akihito does not stand a chance against Mai and the entire Ghost Hunt family! Stay safe and update when you can. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! That is all I can say about this chapter. Stay safe and update when you can. |
![]() ![]() ![]() D I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start to the case. I like this older version of Chiaki, she will be able to stand her ground with Naru. Love the mother/daughter interaction between Mai and Shion. Update when you can. Stay safe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great storyline can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back! Hope you are staying safe. I knew the gang would get Mai back where she belongs. Shion really gave Lin a run for his money. Wonder how long Mai being involved with just non violent entity cases is going to last. Just curious why you chose to pair Mai with Lin instead of Naru. Update when you can. |
![]() ![]() ![]() will you be updating any more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Amazing story so far. It is wonderful. I hope to read more soon. |
![]() ![]() Great work. Just found the story and really enjoyed it. Looking forward to what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it is going good and I would like to read on to find out more! Please update if possible! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So is Shion like a protective charm to Mai? Or did the possessed man triggered Mai's powers? Oh... the possibilities. And the romance will be a slow burner? I hope it won't be that slow. Thanks for sharing your story and I am looking forward to the next chapter! |