| Reviews for Unwanted and Unseen |
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   Mirabitur chapter 7 . 7/28 I like what i've read so far! |
| Mirabitur chapter 6 . 7/28 hmmm, wonder whats up with her dad... |
| Alsynea chapter 7 . 6/23 Hi, this is very interesting ! I'm curious about what's going on with her (and her father) Can't wait to read more, thanks for sharing |
| xSiriuslyPadfoot chapter 7 . 6/16 Great chapter! I just love the humorous encounters between Trixie and the Cullen’s! Her meeting with Seth was pretty amusing. I hope there will be more of him in the upcoming chapters! |
| A Nonny Mouse chapter 7 . 6/15 Ooooo! Can't wait for more! Love your OC and all the interactions, Alice will be Alice. *sigh* But really, I like where this is going! |
| WickedlyMinx chapter 7 . 6/15 Binged this story all day and I like it a lot. I feel like she’s a supernatural creature with her powers hidden, maybe her fathers doing sort of. |
| chellekathrynnn chapter 7 . 6/15 You misunderstood me. You always write “I am” instead of “I’m” or “we are” instead of “we’re.” “It is” instead of “it’s” to me anyway it takes away from the story and it becomes monotone and has no personality. I’m not trying to be rude or anything just trying to help you understand what I mean when “they talk like robots.” |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/8 You awesome little genius! Thanks for writing this story, it's soooo good! Can't wait to see what's next. And really, well done, it's really interesting :) |
| chellekathrynnn chapter 2 . 4/13 Why do your characters talk like robots? “I am home.” “I am here.” “She is great.” |
| keikei313 chapter 6 . 3/22 I can’t wait for the next chapter! I wonder what background information about Beatrice was Carlisle referring to at the end of the chapter; also what’s wrong with Beatrice? |
| DominoDuh chapter 6 . 3/19 You've got me on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to find out what's wrong with Beatrix and why she feels this way :D |
| xSiriuslyPadfoot chapter 6 . 3/19 I’m so happy you updated! I thought this story was on hiatus! I really enjoyed this chapter! I love Trixie and Alex’s interactions! I believe her Father might be a Vampire, but I guess we just have to wait and see lol. |
| Marmite-1 chapter 6 . 3/19 I love this story and can't wait for the next update! |
| keikei313 chapter 5 . 11/26/2019 I can’t wait to read the next chapter! |
| xSiriuslyPadfoot chapter 5 . 7/27/2019 Oh wow! I really love this story! I love Beatrix! I’m glad she denied the ride home from Jasper and is not awe struck by him or his family. She is cautious around the Cullens, which is good and refreshing too see as it seems like almost all OC’s is written to be accepting and craving their attention on this site. |
