Great storyline looking forward too next chapters

UPDATE! Lol can't wait to read next chapter.

wild idea. Sasuke x Mei?

Okay that ending had me smiling and tearing up all at once. It was sweet of you to do that for Naruto. I look forward to another great chapter.

Asa and Anko should move in with Naruto.

Nice chapter, especially Naruto's reaction to the photo. Any chance he could get one with both his dads and Kushina later on?

With the Uzumaki Compound's huge size, Karin should move in since she is an Uzumaki after all. In addition, maybe Teuchi and Stand should move in too since they make Rāmen.

Hey fanreader 26, I am enjoying the story so far. I am glad to see a long naruto story that is still being updated. A lot of my favorites have died off in the last year or so, so I am grateful that you are still putting out chapters.

I really enjoyed sarutobi growing a backbone and having Danzo killed and dealing with the civilian council. Incompetent sarutobi is one of my least favorite overused fanfic tropes and I’m glad you took that in a different direction. One thing that I think would be cool if you developed a little more would be the feelings of the villagers now that the civilian council has been removed. I feel like in this fic the hate seemed to be mostly a danzo, homura (sp?), and the other council members that trickled down into the general populace. Obviously they aren’t jumping straight to hero-worship, but I think it would be reasonable to see their blind hatred and prejudice be challenged by some of naruto’s comrades and without the council there to push the other way maybe some magic happens.

Obviously it is your story, take from that you will, and thanks again for writing some quality story. I look forward to seeing where you take the story now that you are out of the chunin arc and the options for shenanigans are quite numerous.

Aaron

Since you mentioned someone moving in with Naruto, what about Anko? Ir if you were thinking romance wise I'd vote for Ino.

Did you seriously just make a Bleach training ground under Naruto's new compound? That is awesome! Keep up the good work.

"-got along with Choji when they all went to Ichiraku and ended up have a competition on how many bowls they could eat and even if Naruto knew he would not be able to buy anything else for a while with the little amount of money he got from his monthly Stipend he really had fun with Choji."

And he beat Choji by eating more bowls than him, much to Choji's shock

Nice place Naruto has there. As for being larger than one person should have, Sasuke lives in his clan compound. Pretty much the same thing.

Rewriting the start of the story and need ideas? Well, you could keep the mob idea, just lessen the number chasing him and change why they are chasing Naruto. Instead of "Die demon/Finish what the Fourth started/Pay for killing our families/rarrr" whatever, they could be chasing him because he just pranked the hell out of them and they wanna punish him. Of course, things go too far once the chunin join in with their own agenda...

I first off love this fic and the mob. I mean in the beginning naruto's life is supposed to be hell on earth also assume should meet a video with the sharingan while on a mission and that's his pairing.

Thank you for the chapter! That was too sweet at the end. XD
looking forward to more.

Honestly, if you change the beginning from a mob attacking him to a small group of freshly-made genin beating him up and stabbing him with a chakra infused kunai, it would be a little less cliche. Personally, I don't have an issue with it, but you said you wanted suggestions/ideas for it.

In any case, I am curious on how you plan to utilize the large empty field by the bath house. It would be cool if the area was changed into an training/obstacle course for both his fox and/or human forms.

Well this story is mainly a Drama, and not a realy good one at that.
Naruto kindnof feels always to weak and angsty for my taste, with the cooperation of Karuma and him being basicly a biju and all he is weak as all hell.

The Romance is drawn out and confusing because of suden switching.

If I had to rate story it would be about a 4.5/10 not realy bad but nothing that realy made me want to read more.