Welp I finally reached the final chapter and once more I’m depressedly bored.
Anyway enough about my undying boredom
I wanna know if your going to make an omake about gamer shirou helping ritsuka in the fgo-verse

Very good chapter
Keep writing.
Blessings and good health to you and your loved ones.

This chapter was pretty bad.

Good

Nice job

What was this garbage?

While some readers already pointed out that you made Shirou too much of pacifist, I want to point out that chapters like this don’t work in your fanfic in my opinion.
You wanted to have one-shot chapters with different servants, which is interesting idea but you have many chapters that require 2 part to make them work. For example, chapter with Artoria Alter. Now, that chapter extremely unsatisfying with OOC Alter alone but since we never seen how it ended it become only worse. We don’t know if Shirou learned anything from that, don’t know if Alter changed her opinion or who succeeded in the end. And we won’t learn until you will make 2 part. The same issue with Mordred chapter. You set up interesting idea but quickly end it and that’s make it unsatisfying. Chapters like these require continuation to make them complete which defeats purpose of one shot chapters with servants.
You have great chapters like Leo, Nightingale that work very well but then there chapters like Artoria Alter, Semiramis and Mordred. They set up interesting argument, however always one sided and don’t go anywhere. Also, I noticed that these chapters give Shirou few lines or make him OOC only to present servant in better light.

Well cool
Correct me if I'm wrong but Ubw Shirou And Heaven's Feel Shirou are Stronger than Miyuverse Shirou
And I'm sure That Gilgamesh could Steamroll Angelica
Also just killing Zelretch isn't enough since a Version of Him from Another Universe Would just come
Also Archetype Earth is immune to the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception (not Normal Arceuid tho)
Good chapter

Also something that doesn't have much to do with this story But will Fate Last Heaven Redux be uploaded again cuz that's a good story (going to ask that every time before having an Answer)

eh can't say that i like this chapter, more dissapointed than anything right now since i'm more intrested on Shirou's meeting with another Shirou so i'll skip this chapter

Thanks for the chapter waiting for the next chapter please update soon

He's supposed to get stat points for him to allocate after a level up. Not allocate them automatically to everything by 1!

They! Have you decided to bring Bazett to story? She is only 13 years old but she could really be another big sister to Shirou while teaching him compat skills.

Sorry about this but any notion or posibility of Julian being anywhere near Shirou screams betrayal and danger for the Emiya family and gets me pissed off, while they have done nothing wrong yet thanks to watchin and reading Prism Illya, I truly relish his suffering in any fanfic. But all in all lovely story and look forward to updates!.

There is 1 drawback in your game system. When there was an inscription about the beginning of the battle with the boss, special music usually always plays. Its autoplayed in my head, but this was not have in the text. Heh

To be honest i thought Kiritsugu's reaction whould be something along the lines of:"Nope,not gonna deal with you have visitors,*sigh* i'm to old for this shit"