This chapter killed the story. You've been writing like a schizophrenic and this chapter jumped the shark. You should really rewrite this chapter or the entire story once you figure out what you actually want to do with it. This is not a parody or a crack fic. It's just a poorly plotted OP Taylor fic.

You should close reviewing for guests.

The fic is very good. Please update..

Well it is a crack fiction but if the Entities would be able to wield the power of mentifery to the max that means the cycle has no reason to exsist. THEY have WON, they defeated the entrophy, why the FK try to continue the CYCLE?

I Think that most authors regard to highly the WORMS of Wormverse. They in many cases regard them as if they would be some sort of omnipotent beings when in all likelihood they do not matter on a Multiversal scale and the idiocy of the Shard Programming that builds their Bodies does not help them.

Interesting twist, looking forward to how his is going to go. With Taylor time powers outted she could get a lot of good will undoing grey boy bubbles.

Yeah damn she triggered both of them? Hmmmm nice

Noce noce

Hohohohhoo nice

Taylor controls time so it's hard to take these last two chapters seriously as far as any concern on Taylor's part goes. Either this is all a plan by Taylor or Taylor is a complete fucking idiot for not immediately fixing things. Since Taylor has so far not been an incompetent moron, we have to assume this is all her plan since she hasn't rewound things or intervened as she easily could.

So she can't see triggers? She's too overconfident, but I guess having unlimited retries does that to you. I hope she can fix this mess she caused.

You know, I really had to think about it for a while... Can it really be considered crack, when really, all powers are basically bullshit? Added to that, this IS Worm...

I will concede that in just about anything else there would seem to be quite a bit of crack in this, but, as you said, it really is just Tuesday in Brockton XD

Anyways, despite the *gasp* unconscionable false advertising (lol) I am definitely anticipating more :P

Welcome back! We've missed you. Glad to see you're writing as epic as always.

Lol what. Rofl this chapter.

Emma just got put on that shit list lol.

Interesting.

Poor guy.