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Ray killed her dad too, so two people

I'm not really a fan of this ending. At least grant Rachel's wish before you arrest/kill off Zack. It's a bit ooc and clunky but interesting. I just wish you could've expanded more on their quirks and their effects on the bnha universe.

I actually was enjoying this! Well... I hope you get a little inspiration and come back for a little more... but even so, all things should go to an end. Also, I’m just going to assume that Zack gets a life sentence sine he confessed, but this is Japan, so idk. Their law might be different. Great story!

... I have no clue why I wrote Zack as Zach... also, not really a fan of this as an ending...

Aww damn, this'll be ending soon...!

Regardless, I'm pumped for the next chapter~! :D

I had a daydream while reading this fanfic of this discussion happening while the cast of MHA watches:

Rachel: "Zach is the only one who can kill me, and Zach can not die until he has killed me. Then, once we are both dead; we begin anew in our next lives and do it all over again and again and again... forever unto eternity, my God of Death."
Zach: "Heh; Forever unto eternity, my Angel of Death." *swings scythe to kill Rachel*

It's out of character, but dammit; I like it.

I'm pumped for the next chapter~! :D

I'd love for you to continue this story, but only if you want to~!

This is good keep it up, also if I could make a recommendation no more censors please

Love it

I’m extremely excited for when Rachel and Zack find each other and what they’ll do.

Since you said you wanted reviews I guess i should say something constructive I really like this story but it would be nice if you went more into details.

Hope to see more of this soon!