Reviews for DownPour
Guest chapter 26 . 7/25
You are a great writter ya know ! Story is awesome pity you stopped this story...but anyway this is an awesome collection is stories especially the one where Artemis takes Percy into the hunt when he was bullied and the one where Artemis came to pick up Percy with the hunt and also the last one...I really enjoyed this story thanks to you️️️...I am Artiana Zoeica in fanfiction world . Thank you for the story which inspired me ...hope ya right more. I am 15 right now so this series really made me have my fun
MMShaneA2020 chapter 1 . 7/22
Is this a series of 1 shots?
ApplePi5 chapter 17 . 5/14
lol I'm a boy and I know getting kicked in the balls is painful (even if I'm too fast to ever be kicked there). An older kid stole my friends lunch money so I choked him and kicked him in the balls really hard. He screamed like a little girl
ApplePi5 chapter 9 . 5/14
IT'S MY BIRTHDAY ON MARCH 23 YAYYY
lazichicken123 chapter 15 . 4/15
For this continuation you could do an archery tournament and have the rest of Percy's mortal family be hunters. Artemis would obviously win and Percy gets to congratulate his girlfriend
PurpleArrowhead chapter 4 . 3/1
that last line is the best Ch 4
AEceros chapter 9 . 12/19/2019
So these are essentially a collection of oneshots? They don’t seem to be a cohesive story.
Guest chapter 28 . 11/27/2019
Another very fun chapter! I loved it. It's fun to see Artemis defending Percy from high school bullies. Well, I hope you don't mind, but I've been thinking of some more suggestions for your story. Like, since I really like your updates, I thought I'd contribute a little more to the ideas. So I thought of a few more things that might be fun for the next few chapters. Anyway, I really hope this doesn't bother you, but if it bothers you, you can ignore the urge, no problem. Well, the suggestions I thought are as follows:

1-Jealousy: Due to Percy's time among the hunters, he ends up making a new friendship with one of the recruits, which leads him to spend much of his time in the company of this new friend. Oblivious to him, however, all the time spent around his new friend makes a new feeling stir up about Artemis. A feeling that was previously unknown to her within her relationship with Poseidon's favorite son. The famous feeling known as: jealousy.

2-Ages: When Percy finds himself trapped in carrying out important work on the major historical events that have taken place in the United States, he soon has the idea of enlisting the help of Artemis, as she is a goddess who witnessed almost all of human history. , reporting such events to him wouldn't be difficult right? But Percy becomes unable to take the job seriously when during Artemis's explanations, he nevertheless notices how really old she is, and especially how much fun it is to tease the moon goddess over her several centuries of age.

3-While strolling through the half-blooded camp, Percy and Artemis are taken aback by a large infernal dog who throws himself upon Poseidon's son, to the goddess's despair beside him, but before he can attack the creature, Artemis is stopped by a shout from Percy, warning that this infernal dog was no threat but a friend. While introducing his beloved Mrs. O'Leary to his girlfriend, Percy can't help but laugh at her astonished and surprised face when he finds out that he has a hellish dog as a pet.

4-Nightmares: During one of Artemis's many visits to the Jackson apartment, she finds herself in conflict when in the middle of the night, during a strong and intense storm that falls outside, she wakes up with Percy flipping over in bed. by his side, moaning and muttering as his shirt was soaked with sweat and he whispered a single word that sent shivers down the moon goddess's spine: "Tartar."
(In this chapter, Percy's baddies would refer to the time he spent stranded with Annabeth in Tartarus, thus causing him to have some very disturbing nightmares about it. While Artemis would try to comfort him over his fears and Bad memories.)

5-Small Talk: During some afternoon at the half-blooded camp, both Percy and Grover found themselves foolishly inside Poseidon's cottage, tossing out some conversation to distract themselves from boredom and catch up. But in the middle of this conversation, Percy is questioned by his best friend about his love life, because now that it was over with Annabeth, a new relationship was plausible, wasn't it? But all the satyr received in response was a lip bite and Poseidon's son averting his eyes. Curious at this reaction, Grover insists that Percy give a more direct answer to his question, which at that moment only made the hero of Olympus cringe a little more. After all, how could Percy tell his best friend that the girl he was dating was none other than the moon goddess herself? The goddess that all satyrs were madly in love with? Didn't it seem somehow that Percy was betraying his protector's confidence even though he knew Artemis didn't care about the satyrs?

6-Protectors: The relationship of Percy and Artemis becomes public knowledge to the Greek world and oddly enough they both receive full support from those who know him, except of course from a single person, or rather a single god: Apollo Don't get it wrong, the sun god is not furious or wanting to send Percy to Tartarus himself for dating his sister, after all Poseidon's son has proved his worth to the Olympian gods several times, which in consequence , earned the respect and trust of Apollo for him. However, even though his sister's boyfriend is Perseus Jackson, nothing changes the fact that he is a boy. And boys in Apollo's opinion would always try to steal Artemis's "innocence and purity." With that in mind, the sun god goes after Percy to show that there are LIMITS on how far Percy can go with Artemis within his relationship. Especially what Apollo allows and doesn't allow Percy to do with his twin. After all, every self-respecting "elder" brother always honors the duty to protect his "little sister," doesn't he?

7-Diana: After a visit to Camp Jupiter, Percy soon finds himself intrigued by the Roman personification of Artemis, so Poseidon's Son, driven by his curiosity, seeks to approach the moon goddess in order to know his other half. And after much insistence, Percy convinces Artemis to temporarily cede his place to his Roman personification, so that they could both talk and get to know each other, however Percy soon finds himself in an unusual situation as he comes face to face with a silent goddess of long black hair and that looked at him menacingly and cautiously with his intense green eyes, leaving him speechless and especially, leaving him unable to act.
(I described Diana's appearance as a goddess with long black hair and green eyes just to differentiate her a little from Artemis, who in turn has red hair and silver eyes.)

8-FAMILY: During a short walk in the late afternoon, Percy and Artemis walked quietly holding hands while talking about random subjects of their day just enjoying each other's company. However, in the middle of this journey, both pass by a park where they see a simple family laughing and having fun together in the midst of a picnic. Percy, seeing the scene in question, decides to play a little with the goddess by his side commenting that one day could be them having a small picnic with each other next to his future son. Seeing that it was just a joke, Artemis, however embarrassed and disgruntled, comes into play and retorts that if they were to have a baby, they would have a daughter and not a son. Starting this way, a fun debate about the preference in the sex of the baby.

9-Now that his relationship with the moon goddess is public, Percy finds himself immensely nervous when Artemis warns him of an invitation made to them from none other than Leto, the famous mother of the twin gods. Where she invited them to the island of Delos for a visit, having an interest in meeting personally her daughter's current companion, the famous hero of Olympus. Leaving that way, Percy very nervous and concerned to make a good impression for his girlfriend's mother during the visit. After all, he couldn't leave a bad memory for his mother-in-law, could he?

10-Golden Opportunity: After some time after the defeat of Gaia, the gods finally decide to reward their heroes once again, which has taken all the demigods by surprise, among them of course, our beloved seaweed head, who is once again in conflict when during the awards the gods
They offer you divinity. Percy now debates with himself the pros and cons of accepting to be a god, while wondering whether Artemis, his girlfriend, who was looking at him anxiously and cautiously at that very moment on his throne, would be happy or not. the idea of spending their eternity together.

11-During a family dinner, to which Artemis had been invited by Percy, Paul is interested in politely questioning the goddess on various issues, ranging from her birth, historical events and even her present days in human civilization as a goddess. However, things get a little uncomfortable when Paul innocently questions Percy and Artemis about their relationship, and especially if they both didn't mind being together even though they were children of Poseidon and Zeus, who in turn were brothers, making them both the same. in front of you, cousins.

12-. After Sally and Paul leave their daughter over their older brother's care so they can go out on a date, Percy now finds himself alone at home with his little sister, just on Valentine's Day. Having promised Artemis that they would both spend the night together, Poseidon's son finds himself lost and with no choice what to do to fulfill his promise, for there was no one else who could stay with his sister. Unable to think of anything and seeing the night approaching, Percy soon comes to the decision to go and meet his sister with him. After all, a child is not able to cause much damage during a dinner right?

13-During a cold and calm night, the hunters are gathered around a small fire next to Percy and Artemis, to which they were talking animatedly with them. But during the conversation, a novice hunter, who had been recruited a few days ago, decides to question Artemis about her history and past, more specifically, about the truth behind Orion, the goddess's supposed first love. This leaves an uncomfortable mood for everyone present, especially for Poseidon's son, who is jealous of Artemis for the first time.

Well, these are the suggestions. I sincerely hope that they can help you in some way about the story as I wanted to contribute a little more. Anyway, once again, I hope this list of suggestions I made doesn't bother you, but if you do, I apologize. Well, that's it. I hope the suggestions help you in some way and until next time.

Oh, before I forget, the headlines that are ahead of the suggestions were just so I wouldn't get lost in writing the suggestions and get away from it, so just ignore them too.

To the next!

Cheers!
Mr.Salvos chapter 28 . 11/25/2019
I like it
Lucys demon chapter 28 . 11/24/2019
Sadistic Artemis is best Artemis.
chapion-of-apollo chapter 28 . 11/24/2019
Hey! i love this story so far and I wanted to share a fluff idea. Artemis steals Percy's hoodie and he has to try to get it back. I'll leave the rest up to your beautiful imagination
Momentei chapter 28 . 11/24/2019
Just read through all of your one shots I have to say that they are really great. They are short but at the same time I feel like the stories tell so much.
Draconic king chapter 28 . 11/24/2019
Haha no problem at all it was worth it XD
Lucys demon chapter 27 . 11/13/2019
I just realized that Percy is a veteran! Man, I feel weak now, XD!
Guest chapter 27 . 11/13/2019
My gods! I was really happy and surprised at the same time. This chapter caught me off guard, as I didn't expect my suggestion to be a good idea, but bro, I was really happy reading this update. It was a simple and meaningful moment, just the way I thought, and of course it was a moment that in my opinion was also cute.
I really enjoyed the chapter and thank you very much for writing it. Thanks!

Anyway, I will look forward to the next kkk updates. I'm sure a lot of good things can still come around.

Thanks again for the chapter, I really loved it, it was really nice to read.

To the next.

Cheers!
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