Kryptonian herbivores... LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

Lmao this fic is awesome.
Hilarious and cool simultaneously.
Lmaoooo
You should definitely continue this fic. Post the rest of it or at least update it. It's a pretty good story. But you haven't updated this fic in SO LONG. please post more soon! Very interesting. Can't wait to see where the plot goes next.

why would you send to another verse, it is a little infuriating.

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Can we get some more chapters for this story please? I'm really enjoying it.

In another possible plot line. What if... from the Legends lore, Jedi Grandmaster Luke Skywalker, whom had passed away sometime after 45 ABY. You had inserted yourself into his Force ghost, retaining all of his memory, and knowledge. Then reincarnated into Sheev Palpatine, of the House of Palpatine. First born son of Cosinga. Instead of reuniting with the Force, like the Luke had done originally?

Born 82 BBY. The amalgamation that is now yourself, will have until Sheev's fifteenth birthday in 67 BBY. In order to; attain his mastery of the Force, find Shmi (born in 72 BBY) before she is sold into slavery in 66 BBY. Then wed each other, when she comes of age. Giving the future Anakin Palpatine (born 41.9 BBY), some older half siblings. And security, as well as stability. Being trained by one with such extensive experience in the Force, is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.

Furthermore, either eliminate an investigative team from the Subtext Mining Corporation that'll discover the large sources of Plasma on the planet Naboo. Or both Sith, Tenebrous and his apprentice, Plagueis. When they traveled to the planet Bal'demnic to investigate a lode of cortosis ore. However, their M-2 mining probe droid had been sabotaged by Subtext Mining, and ignited a pocket of lethane gas, causing a massive explosion. Though Tenebrous managed to contain the explosion, Plagueis saw the opportunity to kill his Master, collapsing the ceiling of the cavern on to Tenebrous. Sheev would only have to intercept Plagueis alone, before he leaves off world. Thus, leaving a Bith under the moniker Darth Venamis, claiming to be the secret apprentice of Tenebrous. To carry on their legacy.

Derail the original reign of King Bon Tapalo (65 - 46 BBY), and his equally corrupt successor, King Ars Veruna (46 - 33 BBY). Whom were backed, and manipulated by Magister Hego Damask II (Darth Plagueis), and other interested groups from behind the scenes—marked Naboo's assimilation into the greater galaxy.
Sometime later, Magister Damask, and other InterGalactic Banking Clan executives. Came to Naboo to formalize their agreement. Damask Holdings ensured that Tapalo became the King of Naboo, with Veruna as governor of Theed. Outer Rim Construction and Assembly and the Trade Federation received contracts to export Naboo's plasma. Over time, however, the alliance came to be seen as exploitative and corrupt: isolationists like Senator Vidar Kim pointed out that the deal allowed the Trade Federation to sell the plasma on at up to twenty times the price it paid the Naboo for it.
Would be a mitigating influence upon Consinga Palpatine's ambition, if you established Sheev as King. Then choosing Padmé Naberrie (born 46 BBY) as your successor. Making them, one of the Royal Houses of Naboo. Bringing Anakin, and Queen Amidala closer together. And dissuading any relationship from occurring with the likes of Palo, Ian Lago, or Rush Clovis. Keeping Naboo out of the affairs of the Galactic Republic, and the unwanted attention of the Jedi Orders.

It's an idea. What do you think? Too much for you to delve into? Love to read it, if you wrote it!

I reread this story, and I have been enjoying reading this prologue. Eagerly awaiting future installments. Thank you, for sharing your story.

Great story so far can't wait for more.

Taking on the Goa'uld with the aid of the Asgard would probably make for an epic war, but I also think it's short sighted. The Goa'uld are feudal in nature and constantly war amongst each other. The only time they unite and apply their combined strength is when fighting against a powerful external enemy. That's exactly what Vor is doing. He's giving them an enemy that they can temporarily unite against, setting aside their animosities. That's when they're strong. Strong enough in canon to even "defeat" a race as powerful as the Asgard.

The entire Goa'uld culture is based around one powerful Goa'uld killing another and that Goa'uld absorbing all the ships, soldiers, and planets of that defeated Goa'uld. Someone could impersonate a Goa'uld and do just that. I know it's not as fun as an epic battle between multiple powerful species, but it'd probably be more successful.

Nooooo it’s over

The only small issue I’ve seen is not adding dates or anything like that, like when did he arrive in the Stargate universe and stuff

I think I love this story :) hope it continues!

Please, Don't abandon this story.
When are you going to update?

What utter rubbish. You’ve taken all the worst parts of empire building five and shoved them into one story