Hi! You might recognize me from your other fic, The Hawk's View! After 4 years, it's still one of my favorite Avengers fanfic and when I decided to reread it again, I chanced upon this one. I'm not sure why you stopped this one but I look forward to more chapters of it when you can. It's really good and interesting. There's not many fics about Tim and this is a great one

I like tolkien. Also shadowrun, in which my first character was a cyborg troll whoms major weapons were axes and submachine guns. I would love to see myself as a cyborg troll.

I like that Bruce is cognizant of the parenting problems with his other children but I also recognize that it could lead to a freezing or delayed action on his current son (dealing with issues). Ugh. Just need to wrap Tim in a super soft blanket and cuddle, if he wasn't in, you know, tons of pain. Poor dude. He needs a beach or forest vacation, away form all the stress. :-x

I'm glad you included the different ways that Bruce might have messed up with the others. It shows solid evidence that he did mess up, because you stated facts. Im excited for the next chapter. And I was wondering if we could get a flashback chapter of what happened to Tim? Just a suggestion, don't feel like you have to use it. Keep up the great work!

Awe...come on Bruce, pick yourself up and make things right!

I like how Jason and Damian (the ones who used to like Tim least) are now the most keen for action. I really like your story but it feels a little like it is dragging on without development. Hope to see more of Tim! Thanks for the update!

Tim es demasiado noble,lo primero que haría sería escuchar.

"The only real family he's got is me and Bart."

I'm fairly certain that Conner actually spoke correctly. "Me" is correct because it is receiving the action of the main verb "is". Therefore, the object pronoun "me" should be used, not the subject pronoun "I". Not claiming to be an expert, so please correct me if I'm missing something.

Write on~

This was so heartbreaking to read. Poor Tim is just resigned to know he was right and that he can't trust anyone. So, I blame Wally. Stupid stupid Wally. :-(. Connor was smart to leave the loophole and why couldn't that have happened? The subtle tremble in his hands...The overly stiff posture and verbal banter; his not sleeping, what position can he be in without pain? The answer is none. He is pain.

oh man...this is getting saucy...

I can't help feel sorry for Clark though.

I love how protective Con is over Tim!

I love the horse trader negotiation tactic they use and that Lois also most likely utilizes.
Is Clark oblivious to it, or does he simply allow it because it is not something he feels he has to stand firm against?
Although, I'm pretty sure Tim is going to figure it out real quick why Clark suddenly appears.
What is heartbreaking is that with his hearing, he may be able to gather Tim's mental/emotional status more than they might initially think.
Now Tim could try and hide in 'his' room but with Clark Xray vision that wouldn't help...If Tim was really prepared he could wear lead-threads clothing, course that might be bad for his health.
Will Cassie got to Tim first? She could easily handle any of his outbursts and he wouldn't need to speak as much but would that be healthy? Or does he need to speak to help move past it?

I feel like I say the same thing for every chapter i comment on. But other than that this was once again amazing. And I'm curious to know Bruce's plan. The way you wrote Clark was done very well, no portraying him as stupid as some people do, but kind and caring that he can be a little gullible. Keep up the great work!

Revival of DaddyBats. I highly approve. and AWE Clark...ever loyal ever true.

"That old training never goes away" -Tim Drake, Batman Beyond ROTJ

Tim kicked ass, poor baby...is it wrong that I want the entire cast of YJ to collectively descend on those bastards and beat the shit out of them?