goooooood! I don't know how to feel about this omg, the thing I love the most is how you portrayed Five, everyone else I have read just makes him cheesy right away instead of trying to portray him loving but with his true self

BRUH OH GOD I WAS EXPECTING BUT WHEN IT CAME I WASNT READING AHHH

Aaaaah! Perfect :D :D Such a satisfying end. *claps madly* x

AHHHHHHH SO WORTH THE WAIT

Love it! Can't wait till you update!

There is that! But is she gone forever?!...

Now they have a problem!...

Ooof... Heart wrenching. But lovely. Poor Five and his new lady love :’) x

oh my god WHAT? You have to update soon! Please, you can't keep us waiting after something like this

Happy sigh. Action packed and salty-sweet funny- just perfect. Expertly written! She’s a perfect match for Five. Klaus’ last line cracked me up. Soul machine idea is great. Love it :) xx

Oooo so much action going on!..But now 5 has flagged himself as a soul swaper!...

- You're her age
- Jeez!
I died of laughter there

I'm loving every update more and more. And I'm loving how their relationship is beginning to progress, Five being somewhat jealous and Deloris actually admitting how she feels (slightly). I think every time you update I read it at least twice because I really can't get enough of this story

Haha! Finally caught up and loving this! Klaus dances on the page (well tablet screen in my case). You absolutely nailed him and I nearly snorted my tea- ‘long time listener, first time caller’... XD kills me. Excellent :) xx

Well, announce your self!...and watch him run! But they know who he is now!...