Their daughter

Love that you continued the AJ torture arc. As for dating advice, just be yourself man. Talk about what you like, your interests and hobbies, and you may find some things in common. Be kind like louis, only with your personality.

The story and writing are good. Though I do have one thing ive been wondering about. Is Minnie going to bring up AJ torturing her, or is that arc just gone and never to see the light of day again?

I will definitely in the future come back to this story. I just want to take a break for a little bit.

...wait, ok, so you have this whole thing with aj secretly beating the shit out of minnie to the point where she literally goes full psychosis, and then you just...don't finish it. like nobody finds out aj did it, even.

what?

Would love a collage au

Sweet and sad at the same time. The right balance. I hate to see Louis suffer, because I love him, but it's part of a good story. Keep writing.

I have to admit that this chapter has been tense and something tells me that Louis' wounds are not as serious as they seem, they will leave sequels but they will be mild. Keep it up

WTF? Keep up the good work.

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Alright, Clem should have seen that coming. She needs to go beat Minnie's ass. I swear to fuck if Louis dies or has some sort of issue when he comes to then im gonna be pissed.

3

He sure is 3

Oof

So sad and beautiful at the same time. Keep writing.