I hope he becomes OP and INDEPENDENT! would HATE to see him turned into a slave

interesting

A very good story, a few small grammatical mistakes with your ‘i’s as a word likewhile i was in Europe,” when it should bewhile I was in Europe,” it is well put together and I would like to see where this story leads.

Please continue this story

Ha! Take that Rias. Ingvild is prettier!

Hmm interesting! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Great I love it
When will we continue?
When Naruto fucks with Ingvild?
When is Naruto pregnant?

Hmm, have to admit i am kinda enjoying this. Ingvild is a nice change as pairing.

Seems that Naruto will be a good influence on Issei. Hopefully this remains with single pairing. Naruto/Ingvild and Issei/? (probably Asia). Though if you gonna do harems, i hope they remain very small.

Damn, man. You are great at coming up new pairing and plot. Love this one as well. Keep it up, looking forward for more.

Man! So far gteat story. Can wait to read next chapter... I will love read to more if you just keep cannon naruto. Whatever i am still looking forward to it. :)

Esta historia si me parece interesante

:D. Issei being forced to mature earlier on. I hope he kicks Rizer’s arse. It’s nice to see fics without him being bashed for perverted reasons. I mean there’s Jiraiya and Kakashi who are fan favorites - me included in that group. So Issei’s not getting Ingvild into his peerage like in canon. Wonder who will join him?

As for Naruto, will you be going some Indra/Ashurbanipal reincarnation route or something? Will his canon self and or powers ever come into play, or is he going to have some magical version of the original Naruto.

I like what I see so far. Keep up the good work.

a very good start to a story of ori. story line thanks

Please continue this story.