| Reviews for Jaune Arc:Revenger |
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Caboose.RvB343 chapter 3 . 4/22/2019 Is there any possible chance for the chapters to get longer I just need more p.s just post at your own pace ignore me |
DeliriousDingo chapter 2 . 3/27/2019 Ignoring your blatant disregard for site rules aside, the predictable errors of a hack writer abound. Forced dialogue. Poor pacing. The grammar and spelling proficiency of a small child. Stale, edgy plot a teenager experiencing puberty would come up with (though the profile name does let readers know what to expect, so this is debatable). Well...at least you correctly uploaded a fic. There's one thing that wasn't bungled. |
TheManThatWalksTheAbyss115 chapter 3 . 3/18/2019 I have a few tips I can give you if you're interested, maybe not grand ones but a few tips that can be of some use. Overall, this story has potential and would turn into something great if you put enough time and effort into it. |
That guy st6 chapter 1 . 3/15/2019 I do recommend to watch the movie by the same name it pays good tribute to martial artist |
Caboose.RvB343 chapter 1 . 3/14/2019 Plan out what’s gonna go down so you don’t write your self into a wall |
MidKnightMoonglow99 chapter 1 . 3/13/2019 As Bruce Banner said, “I’m undecided”. |