Reviews for Jaune Arc:Revenger
Caboose.RvB343 chapter 3 . 4/22/2019
Is there any possible chance for the chapters to get longer I just need more p.s just post at your own pace ignore me
DeliriousDingo chapter 2 . 3/27/2019
Ignoring your blatant disregard for site rules aside, the predictable errors of a hack writer abound.
Forced dialogue.
Poor pacing.
The grammar and spelling proficiency of a small child.
Stale, edgy plot a teenager experiencing puberty would come up with (though the profile name does let readers know what to expect, so this is debatable).
Well...at least you correctly uploaded a fic. There's one thing that wasn't bungled.
TheManThatWalksTheAbyss115 chapter 3 . 3/18/2019
I have a few tips I can give you if you're interested, maybe not grand ones but a few tips that can be of some use. Overall, this story has potential and would turn into something great if you put enough time and effort into it.
That guy st6 chapter 1 . 3/15/2019
I do recommend to watch the movie by the same name it pays good tribute to martial artist
Caboose.RvB343 chapter 1 . 3/14/2019
Plan out what’s gonna go down so you don’t write your self into a wall
MidKnightMoonglow99 chapter 1 . 3/13/2019
As Bruce Banner said, “I’m undecided”.