What a great story, thank you.

This was great. It was fitting to open their sexual relationship by Mike rubbing El with random items and then do their final sex scene with him rubbing her with the grape. Maybe it wasn’t intentional, but the grape definitely took me back to the feather and makeup brush.
Obviously the smut is hot, but you do a great job really showing their love and emotions too. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for finishing it!

oh my gosh, you updated this! love this story, it’s one of my favorites of yours.

I’m so happy you continued this story! I’ve been busy with college and just now saw you added some new chapters. Made me smile so big when I saw it on the list of stories. Sad there’s likely just one more chapter but glad it’ll get a proper finish. I can’t wait to read it :) :) :)

i love this chapter so much, each one gets hotter and hotter (altho the first chapter was awesome too).

O snap another update so soon? Awesome chapter!

Great chapter please update

I KNEW this wasn't dead! So glad to see this get updated!

one of my favorite smut fics. mike and el have such a special connection here, and el was so good in this chapter

Oh my gosh! I can't believe you updated! You are one of my very favorite smut writers! I'm so happy to see you back, though sorry for any difficulties you might have had. This chapter was worth the wait, because it was so emotionally truthful and passionate.

I absolutely love your writing. I really hope you continue it. I think it’s just so great. PLEASE COME BACK! We need way more people like you.

Excellent stuff. I hope you continue some day.

Awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! Is this enough shout poles?!

Highly improbable, but nonetheless excellently written. Well done.

I miss this story! I hope you update again!