Reviews for Secrets
zaylo267 chapter 1 . 4/28
Awww that was an amazing story OO
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19
"Uncle Donald, I learned something new from the Woodchucks." Huey told him. "I want to show you."
"No fair!" Dewey shouted. "I want to spend time with Uncle Donald first!"
"What makes you think you guys have dibs on him first?" Louie piped in.

so cute... they love him so much :')
wish everyone would just understand donald... not make fun of his voice

He called Panchito and Jose next. For each one, there was a slight language barrier, but when he mentioned that Donald had been hurt, they kicked into gear. Each conversation with them was quick, because the two made immediate arrangements to reach his location.

wow...donald is loved 3... drop everything for him. scrooge love him too... #appreciate the D duck. wonderful story... thank you... and goofy too,,,, amazing

"Wow, your life has been really bad." Dewey said.

dewey my man,...ouch
Robinschatz chapter 1 . 2/11
Oh the story is really awesome

I think it's great how Donald is in focus here
and how he is shown as a brilliant magician

I also love Scrooge's caring about Donald
(of course the whole family does)

there are too few such stories, thanks for
uploading this fic, it was really fun to read 3
AlenDarkStar chapter 1 . 7/31/2019
Great story. I love it.
FanaticFangirl2602 chapter 1 . 6/8/2019
KUDOS!
Mighty Agamemnon chapter 1 . 5/18/2019
This was really nice and touching, and I really liked the cool, fighting moments! I also found it quite unique and interesting that you combined elements of both Kingdom Hearts and Ducktales!

But actually Donald has blood and traits from BOTH his McDuck side (the Ducktales 2017 comics are highly inaccurate and flawed) and his Duck/Coot side. In fact, Donald is the original mighty duck and adventurer who found treasure long before Scrooge did.

And considering that Scrooge has and uses plenty of magic items himself, it was kinda contradictory if not dumb of the show to claim that he "hates magic" because he has no such trait in the original Barks and Don Rosa comics. But I also kinda resented Pete's claim that Donald "can't do anything without his wand" when Donald has beaten him up before with his bare hands (Mickey Mouse shorts "Tapped Out") and Donald is a combination of both brawn and magic (with emphasis more on his brawn side since in nearly every other Disney universe, Donald is the brawler of Mickey's group). Donald is incredibly strong as a physical fighter and I blame idiot Nomura for not listening to Disney when he carelessly assigned Donald's role as the mage. Donald should've been the knight. He's a fighter, not Goofy.

But I guess it all worked out well in your fic! At least Donald got the recognition he deserves from his family! So good job!
animelover996 chapter 1 . 5/17/2019
I enjoyed everything! You did an amazing job with incorporating the seamlessly!
Eris chapter 1 . 4/15/2019
Awesome story. I don’t really know much about Kingdom Heart, but it’s easy to understand in your story. I‘m a bit sad that Max, P.J. and Peg Pete don’t appear. Please write more stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2019
I really really liked this. I don't know anything about the kingdom hearts franchise but I was still able to follow along. I really enjoyed the story you wrote and how you portrayed the characters and their dynamics in a smooth coherent way. This felt natural and I truly enjoyed it. In terms of writing I'd say you did a pretty good job at it, not overly descriptive or too little. Only that Scrooges dialogue was a little off and a bit repetitive but other than that this was excellent. Maybe you could write something about Daisy or dive deeper into the families reaction of this news, maybe even writing the family meeting Goofy. Well nonetheless this was a good read and I hope you continue writing.
8annie81 chapter 1 . 4/8/2019
AWE. All the hugs for Donald.
GuitaristGirl963 chapter 1 . 3/14/2019
More and beyond AWESOME! :) I LOVE IT!
J. Tom chapter 1 . 3/16/2019
My God, I LOVED THIS STORY. The action and the feelings get me every time I read it. It would be interesting to see a sequel to this. It's nice to see Scrooge, Huey, Dewey, Louie, Webby, Beakley, Launchpad, Duckworth, Panchito, Jose, Fethry, and Gladstone still love Donald for who he his. And the feelings from when they discover the truth still get me, as well as when Sora returned, Goofy saying he won't kill Pete because of their sons, and Yen Sid's explanation. It would be interesting to see other character's reactions such as Gyro, Fenton, Lena, Magica, heck even Della to Donald being a mage. Shame they can't meet Sora until he's found safe and sound, or even meet other characters like Riku, Kairi, Aqua, Terra, Ven, Roxas, Namine, Xion, Hayner, Pence, and Olette. Still, I really loved this story. And i hope to see more stories like this soon. Also, i never saw full episodes of Legend of the three Caballeros, so it's interesting to know that Jose and Panchito are magical too. Wicked!
Flame1hedgehog chapter 1 . 3/14/2019
This was an amazing read the only thing holding it back for me is being a oh fanboy and knowing that scrooge and the boys are in the game but other than that this was in one word amazing
Sassafrazgecko chapter 1 . 3/13/2019
Absolutely awesome
I loved it!