This story is fantastic. Are you planning on a sequel? Perfect ending and perfect theme.

Did this guy just stop his evil monologue to ask her if she was okay?!

Why did I read, “Mal personally saw it as a massive safety hazard, but it was fun for the people to throw flamethrowers”

I know it says flowers, not flamethrowers, but damn that’s not what I read.

I always love your works. They were nicely done and exceed my expectations... hmm have you ever thought of making a spinoff for jelsa from this story ? I think it will be interesting

I love rereading this story, but I caught evies brothers name in this chapter as Erick instead of Evan... I'm confused..

I just found this story a week ago and this is the one of the best stories on this site. And definitely the best one I have found recently. Please continue to wright you have a great talent for it. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

This was an adventure worth reading/listening to. had to take multiple breaks from this but it was worth it. Amazingly written and really enjoyable.

I have to say I am sad to know this AMAZING story is over! your writing is outstanding because it had on a roller coaster of feelings. I look forward to your other stories! again AMAZING job

than hades mal lived. great chapter and the whole ben being president was a twist. love the chapter and story overall

awesome chapter. really wonder what mal will do after the war.

I just realized because of my sleep deprived mind, that it's actually been a week since I started this and I can't stop. lol but won't.

Been reading/listening this for the past two days and I need to go to bed but it's getting intense. Ugh I wish I didn't have school tomorrow well in 4 hours to be exact lol.

Great chapter! super happy mal got fairy godmother a wand and something for Jane. love that she helped erica. but ben needs to get over this depression and accept his powers.

Started reading this yesterday, by the way love it. But I can guess who is elsa's husband also erikca and Jessie's father. last name Frost?

What a fantastic story! I'm not normally someone to leave much of review, but I will say that this epic kept me intrigued from start to finish. Normally, I read fics a couple of chapters at a time, but I stayed up well past 1am last night before finally giving in to sleep, before reading the last fifteen or so today. Which probably explains why it took me so much longer than it should've to recognise the Overlands as DreamWorks! I also loved the reveal of the person helping Mal write her story down. I will admit that I was skeptical about the decision to age-up everyone except Mal, but I think you pulled it off beautifully. Definitely one I'll reread again at some point :)