| Reviews for Archer: Shards |
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Guest chapter 2 . 3/31/2019 I need more |
Edocsiru chapter 2 . 3/17/2019 Honestly this is very bad, and filled with fanon bullshit. Why does Danny even know what the hell is a trigger event? Even cape geeks don't know that term, much less its meaning.. How people end up with powers is not public knowledge at all! His sharing of info without care is.. I have no words, not even Taylor would do that... and well, overall his actions and dialogues show him as barely above VoidCowboy in the thinking department, something that shouldn't be possible for an adult, which he mentally is. I guess Thinkers truly don't. |
FanGirl chapter 2 . 3/17/2019 It could be better. |
SeanHicks4 chapter 2 . 3/14/2019 Interesting take, I kinda almost thought it was a Fate/stay night cross |
hnh058513 chapter 2 . 3/14/2019 Cheshire James is just adorable |
Steve chapter 2 . 3/14/2019 Is he seriously going to explain his power to everyone?! Oh for fucks sake... |
Marshal Yenom chapter 2 . 3/13/2019 Forgot about some other things, no he can't copy other trump's, so no Eidolon powers for him! And Eden shards, it depends, but pretty much no. If I do allow it, it'll just be a single use, and no possibility of re-copy. And I know others have seen it, the point was he didn't. |
Marshal Yenom chapter 1 . 3/13/2019 For the two things people, so far, have issues with: He knew Panacea could do way more than he said, he said it for the benefit of any security systems/doctors listening in on the conversation, that was why there was a significant look given. The second, the point was it's Oni Lee, a crazy murderous sycopath, only a few steps away from a kill order, and part of his explanation to the other Heroes there was to have them put it down in their report/debrief/talk/ whatever! as a mercy kill. The orifinal was dead, so he was just killing an almost brain-dead clone. |
zellat451 chapter 1 . 3/13/2019 Actually, yeah, just about everyone has seen that particular loophole. There's quite a few others in that CYOA too, like "Retrospective (2nd)" "Temporal Blast(2nd)" "Blink" to basically become the best assassin ever. Anyway, about the whole abbadon shard thingy, I think releasing the "non-thinker", "no futur sight" or "yes or no answer" limit on True or False could lead to interesting results. Especially along with Dina's and Lisa's powers :D ('cause let"s face it, not gonna meet Contessa so soon since he's not a Blindspot, but he can still become a pretty broken thinker.) |
jppokemon99 chapter 1 . 3/13/2019 Dammit I liked the powers, the premise, everything but Panacea is too ooc and her power is complete biokenisis with the limit that she can’t use it on herself. |
sandmanwake chapter 2 . 3/13/2019 No way the Wards would allow him to kill Oni Lee without him having a kill order. For that matter, the PRT would likely try to arrest him for it. |
sandmanwake chapter 1 . 3/13/2019 Amy's no brain thing was a self imposed limit, not something she couldn't do. She could also do other stuff besides just healing, but also chose not to. Is this an AU where her power works differently or is the main character's power getting the wrong info off her? |
username not recognized chapter 2 . 3/13/2019 good application of the powers, and well written, I find the need to explain the powers in detail to everyone encountered highly stupid tho. |
PixelGMS chapter 2 . 3/13/2019 Three things 1. I don't think New Wave would appreciate their new member killing someone, especially on their first outing 2. I don't think Unlimited Shard Works should be able to copy Trump powers or Dead/Eden/Cauldron powers. 3. I suggest you don't allow Unlimited Shard Works to copy the Endbringers' powers. |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/12/2019 good chapter. |