| Reviews for Watch us Shine |
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Guest chapter 14 . 7/10 YAY yes you updated I live this story and can’t wait to read about his proposal |
Starlight623 chapter 14 . 7/7 Awww, I missed this story! So glad to get an update! I was really curious as to where the Say Anything song was going to show up and you didn't disappoint! And I'm with Eliza! I think growly badass Addy is my favorite too! |
SWChica2005 chapter 14 . 7/6 WHOO-HOO! I’ve been waiting for this update for ages...obsessively checking my email practically every hour! I’m surprised that Zed wants to take it slow but I understand his hesitation and desire to work back up to being physical with Addison again...but the scene bear the end made up for it!Overall this was a beautifully written chapter and I thank you the for the nice long length. It took me forever to read it because I kept going can and re-reading sections to make sure I caught everything and to soak it all in. Kudos! I can’t wait for your next update! Whenever it may. E! |
G101 chapter 14 . 7/6 This was so amazing and cute and above all just so amazing can’t wait for the next chapter |
Starlight623 chapter 13 . 6/3 I love how Bucky and Eliza talk some sense into Zed. And I love their moment at the end. The song, the dandelion seed, all of it. Beautiful as always. |
SWChica2005 chapter 13 . 5/24 I couldn’t help but read this chapter again! And just like the first time when I got to the end where “Gotta Find Where I Belong” is placed, I couldn’t help but hear them singing the words instead of saying them! I know I already told you, but beautiful job! And thanks for the update! Keep up the amazing writing! It’s helping keep us all sane in these trying times I’m sure! |
Guest chapter 13 . 5/23 YAY I WAS SO EXCITED TO SEE THE NUMBER 13 and I hope this is the last gloom and doom chapter i miss them being all cute and loving DO T TAKE FOREVER TO UPDATE PLEASE |
G101 chapter 13 . 5/23 O my god I freakin love this story wow I feel so bad for everything there all going through a lot but amazing chapter can’t wait for next |
zeddisonlover75 chapter 13 . 5/22 I missed this one so much! They both need to take care of themselves and go through this together. I hate to see them fighting but their feelings are completely understandable, they've been through a lot. Can't wait to get back to their adventures as seniors! |
SWChica2005 chapter 13 . 5/22 OMG! I loved this chapter! Poor Zed is trying to keep everything all together and forgetting to take care of himself. I loved how you intertwined the song into Zed and Addison’s conversation! And the tattoo is just so sweet! |
Guest chapter 12 . 5/11 PLEASE UPDATE |
Guest chapter 12 . 5/7 Please update I wanna see what happens |
Wildfire-105 chapter 11 . 5/4 Ok so only if you want to but...I think it would be awesome to read a one-shot of Zevon storming Containment to yell at the Chief. Otherwise love the twist about Dale and Missy miscarrying. Please update soon! |
Wildfire-105 chapter 8 . 5/4 I absolutely love this story, but I kind of hope you do more with Andrew than you did with Graham. Like the investigation comes back and found that he did drop her on purpose and that charges actually get pressed or something. I called it when she was pregnant, but was completely blindsided about losing the baby. |
Starlight623 chapter 12 . 3/26 Couldn't tell you how great it was to see an update from you! And this chapter was amazing! Full of just about every emotion. I don't know why, but the line "Your call, gorgeous" about broke me. I wanted to cry for Addison and Zed, but I loved the support from their friends. Can't wait for more of this, or On the Edge, or Call to the Wild. :-) |