| Reviews for Something Wicked This Way Comes |
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michelmmm chapter 11 . 7/28 Please update! |
Lost chapter 1 . 7/28 Hm I always feel like crossovers that just dump Nazarick in another world are lacking. The plot is driven by the NPCs and as the new setting can't meaningfully resist it is just a remix of the novels. Momonga by himself would be far more interesting. As is you've set the bar for rwby power lowballed the only thing that could change things is the direct intervention of the Brothers and then it would be a stomp the other way. I don't see this turning out much different. |
ikusatsunagi chapter 11 . 7/26 Will you continue? It's an amazing story, I loved it |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22 Giving Ainz fangs and a halo...makes him edgy instead of scary |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/19 Hombre esto sin duda es una de las mejores historias que leído ciertamente se da respeto al autor espero que puedas seguir con este proyecto en verdad tiene demasiado potencial como para dejarse a un lado espero con muchas esperanzas que la continúes |
Outgund chapter 3 . 7/12 Hope it starts to deviate from canon as we interact more with the cast of rwby. As of the first couple chapters its almost verbatim from the show. |
God chapter 11 . 6/22 When abandoning story you could always post 10 words long announcements, 5 minutes of work won't kill you |
Jctherebel chapter 11 . 6/19 Amazing story, I wish it wasn’t dead |
Guest chapter 11 . 6/18 More, simply amazing. |
warman225 chapter 11 . 6/9 I love this. one of my all-time favorite fanfics please continue if you have the chance |
Perseus D. Uzumaki chapter 11 . 6/7 I love the way the story is going and I hope you update soon. The few things I will say is to not let Ainz wonder around let Shizu do her thing and have Ainz interact will people through his business. Have more chapters with Shizu going through class and maybe bring up her 'cousins'. You could also have a chapter with Sebas and Solution interacting with people who will join Beacon later or Faunes in the area. I love the story and can't wait for the update, I don't see many good Overlord fics so I hope this one won't be abandoned. |
Isa Lumitus chapter 4 . 6/7 Raven is in her late twenties? Then this story must take place a few years before RWBY. I say this based on Yang's age, and the fact that Raven wasn't a teenage mother when she started at Beacon. Overall, while I'm curious what you plan to do with the story, I think you're rehashing canon too much. I mean that both in terms of Overlord events, and history lessons from RWBY. |
Laxard chapter 3 . 5/31 That chapter contradicts the first one way too much |
Akuma-Heika chapter 11 . 5/23 This is very interesting as is many of the ideas on your profile. I hope to see more of everything :D |
Akuma-Heika chapter 9 . 5/23 I am curious about what outfit Shizu was wearing. We get hints of it, but it is never spelled out, let alone what drove Coco nuts (since it was apparently just the shirt that did so). |