So... I'm going to put the pro and cons in this story.

Pro:
-actually a non rehearsal of the zi-o episode.

-creative episode naming.

-some of the scene are neat

Cons:
-the story kinda strayed from the premises; instead of "honoring the older hero effort" the oc straight up stole their rider gear.

-the three chapter is a rehearsal of zi-o. :)

-grammar

-zeo. From what i have seen, he is not a good character. He... seem to suffer from being a "mary sue". In case if you didn't know, it's a dangerous and common problem among writer. You can search it if you wanted to know more.

Really good work on both chapters. Can't wait for more soon.

I'm confused on why Zeo used other Drivers to become other Riders than using Zi-O? Will he obtains Build Riderwatch?

So the description for this story interested me with doing more of honoring the Kamen Riders before Zi-O, but...

I was expecting the “current” Kamen Rider to fight alongside the Kamen Rider of that time (which did happen with Cross-Z & Great Cross-Z), but I felt dissatisfied with how you did it.

These three chapters so far aren’t really giving me the feel of honoring the previous Kamen Riders if your OC just takes everyone’s transformation devices and just uses them with no problem. Even with the insignificant info you’re putting in this recent chapter showing he has connections with the Future Kamen Riders.

What’s more is how these chapters are too short and not that thought out since it’s basically looks like you want to shove a bunch of references in here without thinking if it’s the right time to put them or it’s unnecessary for it to be there.

All in all, I’m not expecting this story to catch my interest anymore.

Good luck on salvaging this story though.

Ja ne!

Who is the Build Rider Natsumi?

Interesting job, and cool fight. Can't wait for more.

So, I'm presuming that this is suppose to take place before Kamen Rider Build NEW WORLD: Kamen Rider Cross-Z?

Please don't encourage him.
Your fic is on a pretty good path, though it kinda feels like it could spiral out any moment-apologies for my bluntness.
But seriously, get rid of me and the imposter-i'm the 1st and 3rd akarenger, he's the others.
He's been being a pain for everyone, and I'm pretty sure nobody wants to see him.

Interesting,but a few parts are kinda messy, especially thath about the two cross-z

Not bad so far. Though I am surprised that Build and Cross-Z weren't erased due to Another Build's existence...

You know, it would be better if you just used your official account all the time so this troll won’t have so much fuel to use against you.

You can take what I said however you want, but I’m just giving helpful advice in the end.

Already ahead of you.
And I'm not playing this game twice, you wanna tell everyone I was Akarenger, go ahead, just know you can't do it forever.

Just PM me if you think I’m lying about something like this, idiot.
Also I hate Kamen Rider Geiz’s design more than Kamen?Rider Zi-O’s design!

Ignore the guy telling you to ignore the other Akarenger since the fake is trying to put the fake identity on me.
If you want to know I’m the real deal, the you should know that I’m the UK Fanfiction author: Gadget The Critic.
This happened to me before since I shamefully admit I’m the one at fault for using guest reviews instead using my real account due to my incredible laziness.

I actually like Geiz, surprisingly-he's just as bland as Sougo, but his forms are cooler. So I guess I like Kamen Rider Geiz, more than Geiz himself.
Ignore this guy, ghost, he's been making guests look bad since day one-hell, you've encountered him in a few of your own stories.
Dont be surprised if he turns this into a battleground.