Thanks for the update

This is a good story, the idea of the plot is interesting, but I think the first chapters are better than the last ones, it’s too rushed, many points that are important and could be further developed are written in just a few lines in the chapters. You write really well as we can see in the first chapters, and I believe your story would be awesome if properly developed. I hope you don’t take this in a bad way. Good luck with your story and I wish you the best!

good chapter

Nice- also realistic.

- Super sweet fluff
What a twist

Danzo gives me creeps everytime I read about him in any story...Heck he gives me more creep than Orochimaru ever did and that tells something... Although I liked the twist in plot, but I wish she wouldn't have gotten the seal though... I hope Danzo gets killed soon so that the seal goes... I hope that you write about Itachi, Shisui and Sakura training more...Their bonding is really sweet...

Shisui is a bebe :)

Lol, I feel you on writing fight scenes! I found the ninja ones are even more difficult because you have to keep in mind genjutsu, ninjutsu and taijutsu plus any weaponry skills.
At least with straight up magic (Fairy Tail) or weapons (Inuyasha) you only have to keep one or two extra elements in mind rather than *they wrap the target with ninja wire and set them on fire with [insert random fire jutsu]*.
But the plus side is there's basically no limit to the craziness or shenanigans~!
Best of luck out there, I'm happy to hear you're doing well!

Just a filler chapter, but I was looking forward to their fight, plzz could you write the fights a little longer next time... Also thanks for replying to my review, that definitely cleared my doubt of the timeline... Looking forward to the next chapter...

I hope you're doing alright, things are crazy right now.
The chapter is fun because BIRDOS! Crows are so much fun~! Oooh, they can form a murder of crows now!
Mwa ha ha ha ha ha!
I honestly have no clue who Sakura's mentor will be (is it Kakashi..?) so I will patiently wait to be surprised. Perhaps she can screw up Danzo's plot if she get's enough pieces together.
Best of luck!

Author san can you clarify some things for me which got me confused in the story... First at what age Sakura and Itachi graduated from academy? If I remember correctly then in canon Itachi graduated at 7 yrs of age, so is it same or you have changed... Secondly if they have graduated at 7 and also Sasuke is born does that mean Naruto is born too and the Kyubi attack happened? I am a bit confused on these two things... Hope you can make it clear for me...

they are so cute

Itachi's seems mostly absent these last few chapters...will that change soon? Also it would be awesome to see sakura playing with baby sasuke... can't wait for the update!

It's not like I don't like Sakura, but I am missing Itachi... So could you write their interactions more... Waiting for the next chapter...

I do like this but I do get confused sometimes.
It would be good to know what kind of abilities Sakura had in the past and how much exactly of her abilities she currently has.
Also I may have read wrong but I was SPOILER ALERT! surprised when Genma was suddenly in the mix.
It would be nice to know if Sakura has any plans or see more of her thoughts behind her actions or plans in the future.
The dialogues are cute but I still don't have a good grasp of the character personalities. Not that deeply invested yet.
Looking forward to the next chapter.