Well, it was nice symbolism. The problem now is what is next. Doubt Lynn can do much of a career in sports anymore with being in juvie, but maybe I don't know enough about the system. Even more, we still don't see the main problem stated in the synopsis. So I know it will get much worse before it gets better for someone. even though we don't know what exactly Lincoln's problem will be
Good day!

FUCK YOU LYNN LOUD JR.

Me: Sees Poco Dyess’s comment joking about the Loud family getting executed, and Lincoln and Lily planning their world domination at the end of this story.

I mainly take notice of the latter part, and using common sense if this path was taken, here’s what my reaction would be.

“Oh, so both of you dare plan to take over the world, a sin far worse than treating one as bad luck? Well in that case...” (Points forward, as military and FBI vehicles roll up from behind) “Lock them up with their family. We must maintain globular peace no matter what!”

Lincoln and Lily can only stay still in fear and horror, knowing that both of them have made a grave mistake...

(This is all a joke by the way, just like with the original comment. Seriously though, why would Lincoln want to take over the world with Lily if he’s knows that part of this incident is HIS fault?)

Oh man, this is getting good. I really love how the Lynns are arguing with one another and the nightmare Lynn is suffering.

Keep up with the excellent work and please be safe.

Nice emperors new groove reference

I forgot what am o surposted to say about this fanfic

I would like to see a newspaper article

Lynn sr commited

Crackpot cook declared leagally insane

Similer yo back to the future part ii where doc Brown is in a jacket.

Well, Lynn finally realized what she has done. I can only imagine what her sisters and parents’ realizations will be like as well.

Excellent chapter. Hope you update if you find the time to.

Obviously Lynn was targeted by false gods. The real softball gods will help her in her final battle to save Lincoln, and then everyone will have to admit Lynn was right all along and erect statues of her.

Well, Lynn is one of those people who have to lose everything to understand that they made a mistake.

thanks for this update, now to look forward to chapter 10 with much anticipation.

Lynn is just a short girl with a Napoleon Complex who even made her teammates suffer.
I hope you make the teenage sisters get ganged upon individually by a group of inmates who absolutely hate anyone who bullies their younger siblings.

I agree with you. Chris Savino is such a jerk! He go what was coming to him. But great job!

A call out to Savino and a neat Emperor's New Groove reference. Nice.

Pense que se con las palizas que recibiria en prision se volveria una maniaca homicida. (Que se llenaria de oscuridad el corazon).

It looks like Lincoln is settling in nicely in the orphanage. It was sweet of Lincoln to apologize to the Squirrels for what Lynn did and to be there to support them.

Speaking of Lynn it looks like she finally hit rock bottom and realize what she did was wrong. At the very least she can now start working towards rebuilding her life. Also it was very satisfying that by calling out Narrator Lynn you called out Chris for defending NSL.

I'm looking forward to seeing the other family members have their own realizations. I'm hoping Albert calls out the parents for enabling their daughters' worst behavior even after the guilty verdict, maybe even tell them it was stupid of them to listen to Lynn Jr. instead of their defense lawyer.

Sheesh, I didn't know Chris Savino actually said that, so you did a good job with that reference. Something tells me Lynn will receive more punishment.