love it, kiss

Please write more

Beautiful. That's all I can describe this chapter.

please update more i really want to read more

I am upset give more of the story. It is a great story give more chapters. I am doing grabbing hands.️

Hi there o/
Usually i don't do reviews, however i find myself liking this story very much and waiting for more.
You said that this is your first fanfiction, and i have to say Wow, I've been reading fanfiction for more than a decade and saw many firsts, and yours is great. Also...
Whatever this horrible/awful person said to you, please don't believe it. I know how hard mental issues is, and how easily it is to fall. If this person doesn't like LaLu (excuse me) but fuck what she/he thinks. If she/he prefers NaLu than what is she doing here? The site has pairing search for that. And I know there are many who agree with me :)
I like NaLu, it is canon. But I love a good LaLu story, because there is so much that can be done, they have pasts and darkness and a whole bunch of emotions that can be explored. Besides is fanfiction, we can ship and like whomever we want, don't let this person cage you and bring you down.
I hope that, with this short review, I can show my appreciation for your story and for you, because God knows that not anyone has the courage to start writing and put yourself out there for people's judgement. And sorry if i said anything that may have caused disconfort.
This is your first story and it is great, please believe me, i say it from the heart. With time you will only get better and better.
I hope that you will feel better with yourself too and overcome this block 3

Hello beautiful author! I just want to let you know you have my understanding and support! I’m the same way with hurtful reviews, I feel like I’m making days worse for people, when writing is a joy for me. It can take the passion away. My LaLu story is on hold right now because of mental block from depression. Just know for every hateful comment you have lots of us who love your work and the love you have poured into it. I hope writing will continue to be a passion for you because this story is a blessing when I get to read it. It’s an escape for me. A world you’ve set up and created with love that I can immerse my self in for the duration and feel with the characters and be in my own little world. You have my support, dear lovely author! Hope you get some love out of this to cheer you up a bit!

Yes to the time skip

I love a long story! Keep up the great work

Awe this was very detail oriented. There were a few you that should have been you're but other than that I didnt see any mistakes.

So lucy can't summon with her hands? Well good thing some of her spirits can summon through their own gate :] and have Gajeel club Natsu over the head. Serves him right for being rude. Cannot wait to see what you have in store next chapter.

I love the boat Lalu! It is lovely to me! It's a cool wind

Loving this story. Not liking Natsu, but LaLu is a ship I do like so he has to not be involved somehow. Keep writing and do your best to ignore or block hateful comments. I also like Perfect Memories work so I will look at the other person you mentioned.

love it, kiss

This is amazing! You and your beta reader did a fantastic job! I can’t wait to see what her growing power will do and I so so hope she becomes a wizard saint!

Thank you for the shout out. I really appreciate it. I'm glad I could help sculpt this beautiful story. I can't wait to see what other twist and turns you'll be taking us.
And I cant wait for Lucy and Laxus's relationship to blossom even more.

Good job.