Reviews for breathing underwater
Linh Cinder 05 chapter 1 . 5/16/2019
I'm reeeeaaaallllllyyyyyy wondering who the dad of Annabeth's baby is. Will that be revealed?
Linh Cinder 05 chapter 3 . 5/16/2019
PERCABETH! I really love it! Can't wait for the next update
willcraftNEX chapter 3 . 5/10/2019
looking good, don't let up.

also, don't be afraid to slow down the chapters and extend them. long chapters are a good thing when it comes to writing fics. slow down the pacing a little and you'll be perfect
Fanficgalaxygal chapter 3 . 5/6/2019
OMG Percabeth coming, I love it! Keep writing ;)
EmmaBloomFan22 chapter 3 . 5/6/2019
yikers
Mortisvenom chapter 3 . 5/5/2019
This is really good. But, the only thing that I do have to say about it is please make some kind of hint, like a line or something similar to let the reader know that there is a change in the point of view. Like whe. you switch from Percy to Annabeth. I had to do a double take to make sure I knew what I was reading. Other than that do keep it up. I would very much like to see how this will happen.
Linh Cinder 05 chapter 2 . 4/23/2019
I love it so far! I usually don't read fics like this but I'm really glad I did! (And by 'like this' I mean like Annabeth is pregnant or Percy is engaged to someone else idk)
Ragales chapter 2 . 4/8/2019
"Why is life so shit" unless she was raped, it's her fault. Stupid how society is trying to push for sympathy for all single mothers no questions asked. You sleep around, you get pregnant, that's not anyone else's fault.
ClaytonB1234 chapter 2 . 4/8/2019
Good it’s okay it’s short upload what you can when you can
kaspbrxk chapter 1 . 4/2/2019
Hi...
I was just wondering if you were planning on writing any It/Stranger Things stories in the future? I would love to read them!.
CLAYTONB123 chapter 1 . 3/11/2019
It's good so far when's the next update if you done mind me asking
SonOfHades1 chapter 1 . 3/10/2019
Heyyyy I really like it. Cant wait to see how everything plays out. Outta curiosity are ya gonna explain how annabeth got pregnant?