if there's not description yet think something bringing up his false transcripts and how this would have been an issue if the system didn't get given to him... and the ai too

Don’t have anything to say. Just want to follow story.

I like the idea, but the level of some of his skills don’t make any sense. Cooking is Lv 50, but it’s just decent meals? Observation is Max, but can only get basic info? I don’t really understand adding Analysis on top of Observation either.

You could have a story with an amazing concept, but then you bring in a damn Sensitive Gamer. This kind of thing is bullshit, bland and demotivating. It's not my intention to be a flamer, but there's no way I'm going to shut up about this kind of ridiculous thing. Good luck with your story.

Nvm my review of chapter 7. i see a sentient gamer system and i am out as well. Voice in your head stories are almost always cringy, so i wont even touch that. Good luck with your story

Have not startedreading yet, but please do not include a party system. Ive read a shit ton of gamer fics and they all suck ( at best a chapter or two ) after a party system got included

kill the party system with fire , stuff ruins the gamer

god please in all that is holy , no party system

XD small mistake made. Aurelia is girls name. Masculine is Aurelian or Aurelius.

You know... I am offering my sell as a Beta reader..

Ok. I hope you feel better soon

This is interesting :3 will be waiting for more :3

Pity, hope you get well soon

This story has potential

Hmmmm