Why ...why do you only have two chapters? Don't you understand this is what I needed in my life? Do I need to beg? Please please update ...don't make me cry.

Your stories are excellent

Very interesting so far, I'm looking forward to seeing just how the royal party and others react, especially the idea of a Royal Progress. I can see Robert being all for it just to stay away from ruling, nevermind how Varys, Tywin and the like would react lol.
Can't wait for more!

Work excuse is normally believable. But your excuse is not. 16 months between updates. 4,500 average words per chapter. 16 months? really?

I really liked how you started this story and how Sansa plans to make time for El Norte to have the opportunity to create its army and, incidentally, obtain an independent nation without the rest of the kingdom counting. But remember that the Starks must also earn the loyalty of the houses in the lands of the rivers and the valley, otherwise they will not be able to face the Lannister and the other enemies that appear by appearing as Aegon-VI. I think that on this trip Sansa will have to create alliances in all possible places. There is only one thing that Sam does not join the night watch, I think Jon could intercept him and make him start a trip with him north of the WALL.
Another thing that can help you win alliances is that Bran's mission is to find the more than 200 lost Valyrian steel swords in Westeros so that she can give them to her allies.

Would Theon remember,too? And gave Brienne to Tormund, not Jaime !

Hi! I must admit it, I totally forgot about that fic but I'm also very glad you updateit!
I really like your Sansa, and Arya and Rickon too, the others too but those three are my favorite in this story. Sansa is almost scary in her fierce cleverness lol

Anyway, I hope to read more soon, and thanks for this update :)

:-)

The Hound is not Sansa’s friend. He was drunk, he terrified her, held a knife to her throat, threatened her life and wanted to rape her. Though, that is from the books and I can’t remember the show’s version, it was possibly watered down because of Sophie’s age, but during that scene in the book, SANSA IS 12! Tyrion is also not a friend, he lured Jon into a trap and helped hold him prisoner for a tyrant in the making. Sansa doesn’t need the Hound, god if this SanSan, I will scream. He helped in tearing down her self-esteem, calling her stupid. Then, that fucking line in 8.04, it was just fucked. I’d rather Sansa have Brienne or some Spearwives, let Arya take out Clegane.

I saw this was updated. and jumped for joy.

this is great please please update as soon as you can

Massive errors here !, Sweet Robin is an idiot and Lysa an untrusrworthy bitch.! Leave the Vale be for the most part and try to rember that Robin is Littlefinger's son and Not Jon Arryn's ! Bran can get aquainted with The major Lords of the Vale and their heirs. He needs to get closest to Lord Royce and Harold Harding. Old Norse is near perfect for the Free Folk.!

Loved it ! I love the mind-time-travelling Stark children stories, and this one looks awesome ! I hope that's not just a one-shot and that there is more to come :)

Oh I look forward to further updates!

More!